Chapter 1 - Sirius Black

[yourhorcrux]

So, this is my first chapter of my story that i've started writing. hope it's not too cringy or whatever. :)

Sirius Black was gay; this had come as, perhaps, the biggest shock of Sirius’ life so far. He had always liked girls, or so he had thought. He was known for his appreciation of the female species and had become known amongst his fellow

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[stuck_at_sea]

This is good! I've been so busy with classes that I haven't read a fic in a while so I'm glad I found one I like haha. I really like it so far! I love the tension that's building between them and Sirius' inner conflict. I can't wait for more :)

[yourhorcrux]

Oh my god, seriously? :) i wasn't expecting any one to read this, so thankyou thankyou thankyou :) i've already written a few chapters for it, so I'll post the second one up. I'm edgy that I won't be able to portray the characters properly, but hopefully I've hinted enough that Sirius isn't acting his usual self and stuff. haha :) x

[stuck_at_sea]

Yes siriusly! lol That's what I'm struggling with the most as well. I'm scared I'll screw up their characters :/ But so far it seems like you're portraying them properly, and like you said Sirius is clearly nor acting like his usual self so that makes sense. So far so good!

[yourhorcrux]

are you writing a Potter fic? :) if so, pleaaase link me to it.
and thankyou, yeah, I'm just playing about with it all really. :) i'll post the 2nd chapter up in a sec. x

[takingthebows]

I adore this chapter and look forward to reading the rest tomorrow.

Really great work, I love your writing style! :)

[gngrlvr1]

Well first i'd like to say, Hello new friend! Second, this is incredible! I love how you describe Sirius inner turmoil with falling for his friend, and your description of Remus, Yummy! I can't wait to see wht happens next! You're very talented and i look foward to readinmore of your lovely writing!

[phiso_kun]

Hmmmm, curiouser and curiouser...I'd like to see where this goes. :)