Sleepless

Dec 21, 2010 22:33


Sleepless
Taecyeon/Jaebeom
gen. || g || 562 
idk what this is, I've had this in my unfinished fic folder for months, and I just needed SOMETHING to get me writing again.

It's 3:15am in Seattle and 8:15pm in Seoul. )

group: 2pm, author: bluemonkies, pairing: taecyeon/jaebeom

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dreamoscope December 22 2010, 08:16:27 UTC
wow. this is lovely. theres this air of bitter undertones, but the whole thing actually feels light.
i love how you parallels the whole jay and taec situation, its lovely how words get repeated in the same sequence too ;)

sleepless in seattle and sleepless in seoul. i see what you did there, thats very clever :)
absolutely love this, i hope you write more. (and in case you do, i gonna watch the comm :P)

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bluemonkiesx December 22 2010, 08:28:04 UTC
aww, thank you so much :) idk, one of my favorite writing styles is parallelism and repetition, lol.

LOL, it's not that clever, haha. okay, I thought it was. I'm glad you agree with me, LOL
and I will write more! eventually. this is just going to be a warm up for me :) more fics will be coming~

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dreamoscope December 22 2010, 08:31:46 UTC
repetition is probably one of my fave writing styles too, i love how much emphasis you can give just by repeating stuff.

and yes, im gonna hold onto that word of yours that more fics are gonna come. yay yy :P

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bluemonkiesx December 24 2010, 07:43:42 UTC
yessss! repetition is amazing :DDD

and eek. okay, don't be mad if it takes me like, 982734928374 years to write more fics. LOLOLOL. they will happen, I swear! eventually (x

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shippers_love21 December 23 2010, 06:22:15 UTC
this style is interesting which made it simple yet we get the idea.
the story is kinda sad though, taec weren't able to reply and jay just waiting for it~

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bluemonkiesx December 24 2010, 07:42:39 UTC
this was a different style of writing that I tried :)
and yeah, it was sad. asdfghjkl I don't know where all my fluff went.
thank you for reading ♥

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faz3away December 23 2010, 09:22:43 UTC
I really loved this. It's bittersweet but wasnt too heavy on the sad side. I kinda wished there were more parts to this. Continue?

And the whole stating the time in Seoul and Seattle at the end of each person's POV was cute and the titles as well. *sigh* I miss Taec/Jay bffery <3

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bluemonkiesx December 24 2010, 07:41:39 UTC
hmm, there might possibly be a continuation? it took me years to finally just get this done. idk why, but I couldn't seem to finish it for the longest time D:

I miss everything Taec/Jay, omg. JYPE/SidusHQ need to make nice so that Jay and 2PM can hang out. asdfghjkl.

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faz3away December 24 2010, 08:38:36 UTC
Omg I know. Stupid JYPE/SidusHQ crap. I kinda hope that they do hang out, like secretly hehe.

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gigantic3dream December 24 2010, 05:08:13 UTC
*cry* i bet everyone in 2pm misses jaebeom

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bluemonkiesx December 24 2010, 07:40:16 UTC
/cries with you
I can't imagine them NOT missing him. asdfghjkl.

thank you for reading ♥

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*star studded comment for a sleepless night* animearumira01 December 24 2010, 06:13:12 UTC
..just like my subject icon.. i'll give your fic a star.. i would even make it 5 if it's possible, but unfortunately i couldn't so yeah so i'll just stickwith one ( ... )

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Re: *star studded comment for a sleepless night* bluemonkiesx December 24 2010, 07:39:30 UTC
aww, thank you for your wonderful comment ♥

aigoo, I don't even want to imagine how tough it must be for them to all be apart. it's awful being apart from friends, poor babies. and nyah! I will continue to write TaecJay fics. they were my first 2PM OTP, and they will always by my number 1 OTP. and Jay will always be apart of 2PM for me.

again, that you for reading and leaving this comment ♥
happy holidays!~

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