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Love and Other Variations [various, PG]

Apr 13, 2010 02:15

Title: Love and Other Variations (a collection of drabbles)
Pairings: Victoria/Luna, Sooyoung/Sunny, Eeteuk/Hyomin, Kangin/Gain, Changmin/?
Rating: PG
Summary: A collection of drabbles on the subject of love and variations of the emotion. More to come soon.

Note: started/ended 04/12/10.

( Sunny picks at a scab on her knee and looks at the younger girl hanging her long arms over the railing, staring at the lights of the city below )

genre: angst, pairing: kangin/gain, fandom: f(x), rating: pg, fandom: super junior, pairing: victoria/luna, fandom: snsd, pairing: eeteuk/hyomin, fandom: brown eyed girls, !fanfiction, fandom: dbsk, genre: fluff, pairing: soosun, !drabble, fandom: t-ara

Comments 2

anonymous April 13 2010, 07:17:15 UTC

I liked the f(x) piece, but the sentence structure was a little too jerky to really bring out the depth of feeling. But at the same time there are too many sub-clauses and the paragraph is both jerky and too long-winded. (if that even makes sense)

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Sooyoung doesn't call any of the SNSD girls "Unni", she's counted as being their age since she's born early in 1990. :)

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dalpaengee April 13 2010, 15:41:51 UTC

I actually have plenty of Korean friends who still call people of the same year Unni, which is why I still included that in there, but thanks for the criticism. I'll keep it in mind when I'm writing other stuff.