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Samskeyti (숨. 얼음. 아픔.) [SiChul, G]

Sep 28, 2009 02:15

Title: Samskeyti (숨. 얼음. 아픔.)
Pairing: SiChul
Rating: G
Summary: “i want to experience something beautiful,” he says, and you follow him because that’s what you do, what you’ve always done.

Note: started/ended 09.28.09 kind of just a drabble? idk what this is. its not really sichul, only if you want it to be.

( the bed is small and you hold him close to you, though his toes against your calf are cold like the broken icicles by the pine and his breath against the column of your throat is damp like the water of the lake. )

!fanfiction, genre: not sure..., rating: g, pairing: sichul, !drabble

Comments 19

runawayxxlovee September 28 2009, 09:48:45 UTC

not going to lie, i'm about to go google what vicarious means ;x omg, hannah, why was i not in this comm before. this is so so, so beautiful. i want to quote so much but it's hard to chose--

he takes you to the lake and jumps over the clouds to find the sun and you watch him all the while, watch him until gravity pulls him down, but he’s still beautiful once he’s landed in the crisp cool water, arms splayed out like flower petals drinking the sunlight. you dip your toes in just to feel it a bit more clearly.
and--

and the bed is still too small and he takes and he takes and he takes and the room is full of him and empty of him and your heart breaks with it and you’re running after him but all that you find is the snow and the ice that’s frozen over the lake.
are my favorite lines but i kind of love it all. oh, my heart. the picture and song go with it perfectly and i'm just going to memm this entry, gah. i ignored that it was supposed to be sichul though. ♥

dalpaengee September 28 2009, 15:03:36 UTC

bawww im so glad you like it bc like idek know what it is BUT YOU KNOW IT WAS PARTWAY INSPIRED BY YOUR THING AT SKYGLAZED, NO LIE.

idk its not really sichul. it only kind of is, like it fits, but idk, idk where im going with this. i wrote this at like 2:30am all in one go lol

that picture is from my backyard lolllll, and i love this song, i love everything by this guy, sigur ros, its all nice and slow and calming and inspiring like this.

keychains September 28 2009, 14:55:35 UTC

wifeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. wife wtf. this was so so so gorgeous and jsdaljk.

and whatever, nhi already said it but
he takes and he takes and he takes and the room is full of him and empty of him
that was fucking gorgeous. just ridiculously beautiful.

you need to write more aksjdladks. ;_____________; you don't write enough.

<3333333333333333333333333333333333.

oh and by the way, i wrote you something creepy and weird and hard to understand. :DD

dalpaengee September 28 2009, 15:06:03 UTC

IDEK WHAT THIS IS, BUT IM SO GLAD YOU LIKE IT. i wrote it at like 2:30 last night and i even got on aim to chekc if you were awake so i could through it at you lol.

I COMMENTED ON THE CREEPY THING. EVEN IF IT WAS CREEPY, IT WAS SO WONDERFUL, WHY ARE YOU LIKE THIS.

childish_cynic September 28 2009, 20:11:06 UTC

Wow... I mean, it's really awesome and fascinating and... It's definitely one of the most charming things I've ever read in this fandom*.*
Well, 'wow' is still the most correct word, I think)))
Thanks for it!!!

dalpaengee September 29 2009, 00:16:01 UTC

Wow, omg thanks so much! I'm so glad you liked it! Though I'm sure there's better stuff out there, it's just me playing around with random ideas, haha

childish_cynic September 29 2009, 17:20:26 UTC

may be, I just haven't read this stuff yet, so 'wow' will be my opinion for a while))))) for a long while, I think...)
I just have read it once more, with this song in my winamp this time, so I'm nearly cryin' now......
and, well, can I ask you for permission?) would you mind, if I'll translate this for the russian suju-funfiction community? cause, well, not everybody are able to read it in english, so I'll be very glad, if you permit me to) I'll do my best in translation, I promise!^^ may I- may I-may I?)*puppy eyes*

dalpaengee September 29 2009, 17:36:22 UTC

Oh sure, of course! As long as you give credit to me for writing it (maybe a link back to here?), then sure. Thanks so much ^^

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dalpaengee September 29 2009, 00:17:45 UTC

To be honest, I have no idea what the word means, it's just the title of the song (which by Sigur Ros, who's music is just awesome in general). but thank you so much! I'm glad you like it!

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dalpaengee September 29 2009, 21:47:54 UTC

ooooh cool. thanks! :)

papered September 28 2009, 23:07:26 UTC

hannah, this is so gorgeous, it kind of takes my breath away. like you were saying in your other post, it's kind-of-sichul and yet not, and I think I get that feeling too because it could be them but I'm also imagining all these nameless other people as I'm reading. I love how this is about dreams and trying to see the world and having everything and then nothing - because that's what packs such a punch when you get to the end. and he takes and he takes and he takes and the room is full of him and empty of him and your heart breaks with it and you’re running after him but all that you find is the snow and the ice that’s frozen over the lake, crying, my heart. ♥

I love the photo and the song as well.

dalpaengee September 29 2009, 00:21:10 UTC

bawww thank you. I really just wrote it on a whim and it came out of what I was feeling and what I described in the post on my personal journal, and SiChil was just sort of this little inkling of a presence in the back of mind, they just sort of sprung up to help the writing along, I guess.

The photo is actually a picture my mom took of our backyard a few winters ago! And the music is by this guy, Sigur Ros. He's from Iceland, I think, and all his stuff is kind of like this and inspires me to write, lol