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Fic: The stars are not wanted now

Oct 20, 2011 23:29

Title: The stars are not wanted now
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Character death, angst
Summary: Kurogane was always invincible until he wasn’t.
Author's Note: Written for the remix challenge over at kkuroxfaifor konnichipuu. I took her fic Put out my eyes and I just switched Kurogane and Fa’s roles in this and changed up a few minor things. Sorry this isn't longer, I don' ( Read more... )

kurofai, fanfic, challenge, trc, tomoyo, fic, fandom, yaoi

Comments 24

fieldofclover October 21 2011, 03:39:01 UTC

;A;

BRB, BAWLING FOREVER.

<3

youkohiei_fan October 21 2011, 03:40:04 UTC

I KNOW. The reason it took me so long is because of all the crying.

fieldofclover October 21 2011, 03:42:06 UTC

I actually really like the poem at the start of it, and the way it ended -with Kurogane reaching out to take him away for the final time- but but but

;A;

youkohiei_fan October 21 2011, 03:43:13 UTC

I love funeral blues, it's very beautiful. <3 Yes, there's a few things that are kinda symbolic/references to tsubasa and other things.

mikkeneko October 21 2011, 03:48:15 UTC

;_;

That was beautiful, and so sad. Tears stinging my eyes now.

youkohiei_fan October 21 2011, 03:53:43 UTC

I'm still a little misty eyed from it. ;;;

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youkohiei_fan October 22 2011, 00:11:45 UTC

thank you <3

ragnarok_08 October 21 2011, 04:29:58 UTC

;_;

youkohiei_fan October 22 2011, 00:11:54 UTC

eijentu October 21 2011, 05:36:27 UTC

This was just beautiful and heartbreaking. I had tears prickling from the first paragraph (which isn't usual for me at all!) I love that you started it with Auden, and this: Kurogane stood having trouble lifting his beloved sword and doing it anyway because it was Kurogane and that was what he did.

Really lovely fic. <3

youkohiei_fan October 22 2011, 00:13:39 UTC

thank you ^^

Funeral Blues is one of my top ten favorite poems. <3