bleach_contest Week #1 - Future

[youkai_girl]

Here is my entry for the first week in the bleach_contest. See the cut below.

Title: The Last One
Rating: G
Pairings/Characters: Ichigo and Ishida
Warnings: None
Word Count: 288
Summary: Ishida is the last one.

Comments

[vicious_lullaby]

You're the last of my nakama to die. I've come for all of the rest of them, so I came for you too.

Oh, that's lovely.

And somehow, Ishida dying and his first concern being the state of his bedroom is just so very...him. XD

And the last line. Perfect. ♥

[youkai_girl]

Thank you for your kind words!

[000_hester_000]

I'd like to see the look on Ishida's face if he got Mayuri. Really, I would.

[youkai_girl]

Cool icon. ^_^

I'd love to see that myself. I don't know if the words "shock" and "disbelief" would quite cover his reaction.

[annieroo2]

Wow you captured them both so well. Nice to know they'll be having a party for Ishida too! LOL. I really liked this.

Thanks for sharing.

[youkai_girl]

Thanks!

[veganlion]

Wow... it's been a very long time since I grinned at a death-fic! Gorgeous!

[youkai_girl]

Thanks! I couldn't see that there needs to be anything somber about Ishida's death (except for his descendants, of course), since he knows what happens after death. And you know that he knew he'd see Ichigo and the others again.

[veganlion]

Why did "Death, be not proud" just pop into my head? ...

[compli_cait]

It'd be interesting to see how Ishida takes the afterlife in a world full of Soul Reapers. ^_^

[youkai_girl]

**laughs** You did it again! How do you keep giving me fic ideas from innocent remarks?

[compli_cait]

Innate skill.

^_^

[youkai_girl]

If you say so. Pass some of that my way, will ya?

Anyway, I started writing that already. Just a rough pre-draft, but its started. ^_^