Learning To Breathe: (14/?) (Harry/Louis; University Football!AU)

[youcomecrash]

Title: Learning To Breathe (14/?)
Word Count: 6,800
Summary: University Football!AU. How does your past fit into your present? Louis is still figuring it out.
Notes: I'm so sorry about the abrupt hiatus on this fic. I don't know how many of you know here on livejournal, but my mom lost her battle with cancer about a month ago, so I kind of dropped

Comments

[rainbowchelita]

i just wanna curl up in my bed under the sheets and never come out to the world
i'm feeling his pain
JFC WHY? :'(

[shrdmdnssftw]

Wow. I just read all of this today and can I just say I am so sad that I'd not read this earlier. You are such a fantastic writer and this is such a good story, and I'm being suckered into it so badly. I just adore everything about this - the characterisations, the plot, the twists that you've added in.

I really love the entire football team and the way they look out for each other - Zayn for Louis, Liam for Zayn, Niall for everyone. I also really loved how you fit Louis and Harry's families into this, and just everything about this is wonderful.

[kimmy_lin]

Goddamnit oh shit oh shit oh shit oh god i cant even argh! Just what the...? Why did you wan to push him so hard louis?? It wasnt fair to harry and i just feel angry for him to just forgive him like that but it just arg he loves you ok? ;___; and now. Niall knows and gosh! Everything is fucked up and i need the next chpater please please please

[kimmy_lin]

so I read this again to see if there was things i missed yesterday you know bc i was like OMG OMG the entire time and my eyes were so fast with every sentence and I was reading it on my cellphone and I was mad at the circunstances and just everything so i kind of skipped your note and like .. just here to tell ya to keep strong darling.

[catklan]

Loved it, as always. I'm so sorry about your mother. Keeping you in my thoughts <3

[colazitron]

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jesus. You better fix this somehow.

I love how Louis internalises all of his anger and confusion and turns it against himself and how he can't deal with Harry not thinking as lowly of him and oh god then Niall and the I love you and Louis couldn't say it back and Harry left and no and and and !!!!!! Oh god, my heart is all over the place.