Comments | youcallitwinter: fic: are you going to scarborough fair?

youcallitwinter

fic: are you going to scarborough fair?

Jan 24, 2011 21:26

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you're just a line in a song, fanfiction, er...yeah, ship: damon/elena, fanfiction: the vampire diaries, fandom: the vampire diaries

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damon_s_86 January 24 2011, 17:44:29 UTC

“But she won’t do that,” he casually flips another page, “she’s in loooove with him, remember? She came back for him. The only thing in any real danger is his chastity and a tarnishing of that halo he so spectacularly bears the weight of.”

I wonder, how much did that gesture cost him.

youcallitwinter January 24 2011, 17:50:08 UTC

Haha, that's clever reading. A lot, though. Since it's Elena-centric I couldn't amp up the Damon-angst, so his snark is all hurt and cover-up :)

damon_s_86 January 24 2011, 18:31:17 UTC

yes well you did a phenomenal job of writing it. and then you follow it up with Elena wishing it was Damon in that tomb instead of Stefanie.. talk about pain!

youcallitwinter January 24 2011, 18:56:14 UTC

Aww, thank you :) Elena is mean to him that way, all I'm hoping is that since we only get to hear what she says, not what she feel, there's confusion running riot beneath the surface.

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youcallitwinter January 24 2011, 20:09:14 UTC

I find endings nearly impossible to write, so all my fics get wrapped up with- oh god, I can't think anymore! Thank you so much :)

anarogue587 January 24 2011, 21:31:16 UTC

"Because it's weird but he always makes her feel like that- young and restless. Reckless. Like the moments in which they're together don't really exist so she can do whatever the hell she wants, however the hell she wants it, no consequences, no strings."

This line is perfection and owns me right now. I'm not entirely sure why, but I just think it captures how Elena really feels for him. <3 it.

youcallitwinter January 24 2011, 21:40:45 UTC

Thanks a lot! It's what I liked best about the D/E relationship, just how much they unadmittedly enjoyed being with each other before the whole lovestruck!Damon and Not-forgiving!Elena thing (although that angsty side is fun too :P)

tearsofpearls32 January 24 2011, 22:58:58 UTC

Sorry you are sick but this is absolutely lovely :)

youcallitwinter January 25 2011, 07:24:16 UTC

Well, at least I get to sleep, I suppose :) Thanks so much!

jane_wanderlust January 25 2011, 16:12:09 UTC

OH oh oh ohhhh.
This IMMEDIATELY caught my attention.

SIMON AND GARFUNKEL.
You're after my own heart <3.

But continuing on...this is amazing.
You always have consistently beautiful work, and every time I see a new post from you, I do a happy jig on the inside.
...Sometimes on the outside, which hey, I'm okay with that.

You have such a huge talent, and it is always so evident in your style and quality.

Thanks for sharing, boo.
This is heavenly.

More soon?
<333

youcallitwinter January 27 2011, 17:54:50 UTC

You're always way tooo nice to me, you know? :P But honestly, I LOVE 'Scarborough Fair' and 'she once was a true love of mine' is practically Damon's byline! And the bus scene at the end of 'The Graduate' (haha, sorry, random album connection) is one of my favorite movie scenes, because they're not even looking at each other and you can tell they're ecstatic!

I'm just trying to get Delena together, I just can't seem to get their voices just yet, not for a normal one-shot anyway where stuff actually HAPPENS :P You, however, need to write more as well!