[fic] i knew you were trouble when you walked in [2/2]

[youcallitwinter]

i knew you were trouble when you walked in [ part 1]
veronica mars | veronica; veronica/logan; veronica/piz, logan/oc, wallace, keith
post season three | nc- 17 | warning: mentions of rape, sex, language. | 17,500
And, it's just-  Logan had always been her intense high-school romance. But she had, somewhere along the way, in some secret corner of her

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[treblebeth]

I feel totally exhausted by reading this, in the best possible way. like, I was so caught up in the tension of them trying to just keep themselves together and sort it all out that when I finished reading I let out this giant breath I didn't realize I'd been holding. I think it must be so exhausting, being Veronica. so good, seriously.

I loved all of this but particularly Claire, who you clearly painted as a kind of Lily but also not. Loved the details with real name being Mary, and how she handles the break up with Logan. She felt like such a fully realized character. awesome job!

[youcallitwinter]

I'm completely exhausted editing this! Like, it never struck me that writing a fic this long also involves constantly having to spend time re-reading it for editing purposes, oh my god, I'm guessing I shall hate it soon enough.

Also, I'm so glad you like Claire! I generally have zero attachment to my OC's, and I try to use them very infrequently. Initially it was supposed to be Parker and Logan getting back together, but that wouldn't have worked in context, so I decided on a different route re: Claire!

[streussal]

Ah, I love this! Veronica and Logan in all their dysfunctional glory. Keith and Wallace's quiet disappointment/worry/resignation. Claire! (Thank you for being fair with the new girlfriend.) ...my Piz memories are blurry, but I'm sure your fic is spot on their too.

[youcallitwinter]

I love their dysfunction like nobody's business! They make me want to write, because, for once, a ship actually, canonically fulfills all my ship kinks somehow! I have an inherent dislike for making the "other" people in my OTP's lives awful, so they're usually nicer than my OTP, haha. Thank you so much for reading! :)

[ever_neutral]

omg I am finally here. (I was saving this for the end of my school term because I knew it would be a ~treat~ ok.) Just sped through this all in one. Frankly, you could write nothing but Logan/Veronica for the rest of your life and I wouldn't get tired of it. ^^)

This was epic, dude. (You see what I do.) IDEK how you make happy endings WORK after horrible angst but there you go. AND OMG I LOVED CLAIRE SO MUCH?? Hilariously I think she may have been my favorite part.

[youcallitwinter]

I cannot with you actually sitting down and reading these so late in the fandom day. u r best.

IDEK how you make happy endings WORK after horrible angst but there you go.

OH YOU MEAN LIKE Veronica finding about her rape, thinking her dad died, Logan's father actually dying, both of them nearly getting killed and seeing Cassidy jump off a roof, and then, like two days later, spinning around and kissing gorgeously and being giddy with each other and unable to stay apart even a week? Hee.

I feel like a bad fandom person because I legit appreciate their functionality and adorableness as much as I appreciate their dysfunction omg.

ALSO LOL, CLAIRE, I AM SURPRISED BY THE REACTION TO HER. I have zero investment in my own OC's, but I am pleased anyway :D

[fickledame]

Wow, this was amazing. So well written - both of them captured so perfectly. So screwed up, and wanting each other so badly.

And long fics are great, thanks so much for sharing!

[youcallitwinter]

Thank you so much! I can't even believe I somehow wrote this for a comment fic meme, haha. But I'm glad the length wasn't a deterrent for you, thanks :)

This is epic.

[ext_2377908]

Okay. I was an original viewer of VM back on UPN/WB etc. I was one of the people crying when it was cancelled. Somehow, I managed to go on