fic: the minor fall, the major lift

Dec 31, 2010 00:51

Title: the minor fall, the major lift
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: Nothing serious, a little off course since I'd seen about ten episodes then.
Pairing: Damon/Elena
Summary: The snapshot of an almost relationship,
Author's Notes: WHAT AM I DOING YOU GUYS? I've seen twenty-five episodes in total in FIVE days. And I have exams in two days, oh joy. But ( Read more... )

restraint didn't make it to my dictionar, exam-time-shenanigans, fanfiction: the vampire diaries, fanfiction, you're just a line in a song, character: elena gilbert, fandom: the vampire diaries, ship: damon/elena, what. even., character: damon salvatore

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crimson_kiss17 December 30 2010, 23:13:39 UTC
He gets her a vibrator for a birthday. Stefan’s at his throat in a second and he doesn’t even fight back because he’s too busy laughing at the expression on her face.
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Literally fell to the floor in hysterics. This was such an enjoyable read and I can't but attempt to coerce you into writing a sequel. Anyway, well done.

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youcallitwinter December 31 2010, 06:31:32 UTC
Oh you can be sure, I'll be writing more, I adore these two! I HAVE NO RESTRAINT. Seriously, exam-time always brings about the worst in me, I'm all OH HAI THERE, NEW FANDOM. Not good :O Thank you so much :)

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strangedazey December 30 2010, 23:20:40 UTC
That seemed so spot on as to the way she acted towards him, very nice work.

On another note, isn't the show addicting as hell? I was so hooked by mid-season last year. Welcome aboard!

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youcallitwinter December 31 2010, 06:37:55 UTC
By this time I've seen twenty-NINE episodes in five days, so addicted is an understatement now D: And in the later episodes, (WHY AM I STILL WATCHING, I HAVE EXAMS) when everything's going to hell- it's just so hard to believe- she hasn't even thought about the possibility? Therefore, fic. Thank you so much, I shall enjoy the ride!

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amoenavi December 30 2010, 23:26:32 UTC
Ahahah, you too?

Love it, love it, love it. Love the easy way you portay Elena's thoughts and her denial while still getting the point across.

Also,

He gets her a vibrator for a birthday. Stefan’s at his throat in a second and he doesn’t even fight back because he’s too busy laughing at the expression on her face. And it’s exactly like him- crude, embarrassing, and entirely too personal. And later when he’s sitting on her bed, waiting for all the Stefan-inflicted wounds to heal, he leans closer, his eyes half shut in that way they get when he’s flirting and says he’d like to think of her making good use of his gift. She hits him on the arm then, hard, and pretends like it’ll hurt him, pretends like she didn’t just think about-just pretends.

Please let this happen on the show sometime? Seriously, it's just too perfect. :)

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damon_s_86 December 31 2010, 03:56:08 UTC
yes please.

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youcallitwinter December 31 2010, 06:43:48 UTC
ME TOO MUCH, I'd say about now D: (Btw, your icon is so much love, I can barely stand to look at it). And now everything in their relationship seems to have gone to hell (although I HAVE spoiled myself for 'Rose', so I'm desperately waiting to get to 'that' scene!) and I'm all 'huh, I wrote the fic a day ago, and now it's OOC'. I haven't yet managed to figure out whether it's better to not have the couple get together and have all sorts of wonderfully angsty fandom shenanigans, or whether they should just FREAKING REALLY KISS ALREADY.
Thanks so much, glad you liked it :)

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damon_s_86 December 31 2010, 12:33:27 UTC
I think we're very deprived to want that scene too much :p which we are.

I love my icon too. you're welcome to it if that is the one you mean :)

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waltzmatildah December 31 2010, 02:00:35 UTC
I really enjoyed this! Thanks for sharing.

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youcallitwinter December 31 2010, 06:45:08 UTC
Thanks a lot- I thought hard 'do I really want to post this' (since it's mostly about 600 words of randomness), and then took the leap of faith, haha :)

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damon_s_86 December 31 2010, 03:55:47 UTC
talk about being honest. you nailed it!

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youcallitwinter December 31 2010, 06:47:06 UTC
I'm glad you think so! Because I watched further and thought 'oh my god, my Elena's OOC now', but really apart from the one-true-love stuff, I just think it's sort of impossible that she hasn't EVER thought about it.
Thanks a lot :)

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