We just can't be honest with each other. (Mao/Ohno interaction)

Jul 09, 2010 11:00

A few of you have requested some views of relationships. Since they’re not entirely Maotsujun, or even have Jun in them, I didn’t post them on ebisu_midnights . Each friendship storyline does, however, change and develop Mao and Jun’s relationship still. If you’re interested, you could read them here on my journal. I started with Ohno first, but I doubt the rest ( Read more... )

non-maotsujun fanfiction, inoue mao, arashi

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novemberbaby July 10 2010, 02:51:38 UTC
So this is what you were talking about. Lol. I had no idea what you were talking about in your text until I read this. I can see why you would be sad after writing this because that's the way I feel after reading. Makes me want to hug Ohno so much.

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yoshi09 July 10 2010, 04:13:50 UTC
It makes me want to apologize so much to him and put him in a happier situation in another fic where he gets the girl. Because writing this made me really, really want him to get Mao in the story, even though I knew this scene would end the way it did. -_- *lame*

It makes things a bit harder that I was listening to "Song For Me," "Take me Faraway," "Top Secret," and "Rain" solos at perfect timings while I wrote it. "Top Secret" and "Rain" during the kiss scene, "Take Me Faraway"/"Song For Me" while they had their conversation leading up to that inevitable kiss he had waited forever to give her... but it's "Song For Me" that fits the whole fic most and it makes me sooo sad because this fic felt like Ohno finally doing something for himself in their relationship.

That was a lot longer than I intended. Hope I didn't bore you. x_x I needed a place to put my feelings for it.

*sad Jun icon*

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sparkles_n15 July 10 2010, 03:48:51 UTC
Aww...you captured such a sweet moment between them. I think Ohno deserves a hug or two. =)

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yoshi09 July 10 2010, 04:36:21 UTC
I think Ohno deserves a new fic where he gets the girl because he really deserved it in this one! *sad*

Thank you muchly for giving this scene a read.

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narusaku4vr August 4 2010, 21:46:05 UTC
That was so sweet. I love the descriptions of each and how easy and different it was with Ohno.
The kiss was just so natural, as if they have been waiting for something like that to happen for a long time.

I would like to ask about the MaoMiya fic that I've read last May, it was a preview...has it been posted???

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yoshi09 August 4 2010, 22:27:07 UTC
Are you talking about the Maomiya fic from March? Where Mao is sick and just breathing in Nino's comfort?

Funny you should bring that up! Tammy and I were throwing ideas about it all over again yesterday. It hasn't been posted-- it's quite an undertaking and we want to get it right. haha

As for your comment on this fic... Thank you! I think you're right. It wasn't just Ohno who was waiting for the time to do it, I think a part of Mao wanted/expected it too, even though she didn't know it. Thank you very much for reading!

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glyn_zaelin January 31 2011, 16:35:17 UTC
This is wonderful, even though it's heartbreaking. I love Ohno in this. I just want to hug him and love him.

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yoshi09 January 31 2011, 18:37:03 UTC
Thank you very very much for reading and for your kind words. ^_^ This type of Ohno is one of my favorites. <3

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cahbiebie February 20 2013, 06:50:16 UTC
thank you for this =)

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