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[One-Shot] Destiny's Desire

Feb 19, 2011 00:14

Title: Destiny's Desire
Author: yoonlove
Pairing/Characters: Dooseob
Rating: PG
Summary: Doojoon kidnaps Yoseob for a date.
Author's Notes: Took me about three hours to write this. Just couldn't find the right flow. Got inspired after watching the I Like You Best MV and had to write something. ^^ Sorry if there are errors. I have no beta and I'm too lazy ( Read more... )

verse: highschool, fandom: beast, pairing: doojoon/yoseob

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yoonlove February 20 2011, 07:00:09 UTC

Thanks for reading. ^^

neitoperhonen February 19 2011, 12:24:13 UTC

And now DJ breaks but with her or even better Dooseob make out in school and she walks in and ta da. <3

I like this, a lot. so cute

yoonlove February 20 2011, 07:52:12 UTC

Lol. Thanks for reading. I'm glad you liked it! ^^

hikaritsubasa February 19 2011, 14:12:21 UTC

i love the story but really feel bad for Gina!
I love her too...
write more!

yoonlove February 20 2011, 07:52:40 UTC

I feel so bad doing this to her. >< But I'll make it up to her later~^^

Thanks for reading!

fairybubbletea February 19 2011, 16:30:35 UTC

This verse is pure LOVE and totally awesome!!!

Yoseob’s childish excitement evaporates completely when he caught sight of the name flashing on the screen. He disentangles his hand from Doojoon’s and averts his eyes to staring out the window.
This breaks my heart *sobs crying in the corner*

Doojoon ran his thumb over Yoseob’s smiling face, unable to take his eyes off of him. “I love you too…” OMG i am speechless at this, the emotion that you instilled in this particular sentence is just sighh..idek.. loving you forever!!

LOVE this verse and update soon, since date at amusement park is done, picnic with friends will be next? I am just guessing from your first fic in this verse hehehehe :)

yoonlove February 20 2011, 07:53:40 UTC

Kekeke, I'm glad you like it. There's gonna be many more coming from this verse. (Just cuz I've got so many plot bunnies stuck in my head)

Thanks for reading! ^^

akinoyui February 19 2011, 16:33:01 UTC

Ahh~ Poor Gina but, well, IDK but I kinda support Dooseob *runs away*

I love Yoseob's character. Doojoon's too. If they were to date (I wish..HAHA) I'm pretty sure this is how they will act when they are in Lotte World *nods*
Thanks for sharing this!

yoonlove February 20 2011, 07:54:38 UTC

Dooseob is just too adorable~ Thanks for reading ^^