Cloud One.- Chapter 2

[yoomaydakaynay]

MUSEELO: FORGIVE ME. YOU WILL HATE PART OF THIS. lol XD

Yoochun moaned into the darkness. “Ngh- baby, I can’t see you when you do that!” His hips rolled a bit to the left, a bit to right, and a bit more towards the tongue licking up ‘The Nether-Rod,’ as his many romantic conquests had begun to call it.

This particular

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[miszc]

Changmin asked Chun to make Jaejoong do what??? :DDD
LOL Kinda unexpected.. That kind of mission? I tot Min wants Jae do GOOD things?? :DD

[museelo]

VDBSUGVUOSGVBDSO

[museelo]

I WANTED TO BE THE FUUUUUURST DDDDDDDDDDDDDDD8

[museelo]

okay reading :3
(and not spamming your mail bow <3) :3

[museelo]

GUFSOQDGBVDUSUOUBVODOUVOQ
I SQUEALED IRL WHEN I SAW MY NAME IN HUGE BOLD RED CAPS BFUDBSVDUO 8DDDDDDDD

AND OMG. OMG. EWW. I.. I SKIPPED OKAY. SORRY ;AAA;
... UNTIL I SAW CHANGMIN'S NAME 8D

AND LMAO CHANGMIN IS JUST SO OSM I CAN'T. POOR YOOCHUN XDDD
"when the High King of Heaven commanded you to do something, you did it.

… Even if you were the older brother."
THIS KILLED ME XDDD

OMG CHANGMIN'S IDEA IS OSM O_O I NEVER THOUGHT HE WOULD HAVE THOUGHT OF STH LIKE THIS O.O JAEJOONG FUTURE SINFUL GOD 8DDD LOL

OMG THIS IS GETTING MORE AND MORE INTERESTING BECAUSE I DIDN'T EXOECT THINGS TO TURN LIKE THIS :DDDDDDD
I START TO LIKE THIS FIC MORE AND MORE :333

THANK YOUF O THIS AND THANK YOU FOR REPLYING TO MY COMMENT :33 AND I HOPE YOUR LIFE IS OKAY :33 <3
FIGHTING FOR NEXT CHAPTUUUUUR :DDDD <33

[yunhos]

akldjjsdk;jg SPOT!
going off to read part one first! XD

[yunhos]

THIS IS SO RIDICULOUSLY AMAZING, HILARIOUS AND WONDERFUL AND A;SFKSGLKASJLG ;w;

omo, i love yoochun already! and what changmin ordered him to do is unexpected but it made me laugh XD ... does yunho appear in the next chapter too? :) either way, i absolutely cannot wait! i'm soooooooo glad you're updating again! /glomps

[lynnluvtvxq]

Poor Junsu, shoved into some hole. haha

this is awesome, looking forward to more, soon^^

[purplefin]

I had just started reading these two chapters, and it's very intriguing, I think Yun will be a human?...^^.. And Changmin for the win..hehe...looking forward for your updates..^^