Hokuto/Fuma fic!

[yomimashou]

At long last... I wrote a fic! After resolving to try to write one nearly a year ago, I finally got inspired after Sexy Zone's spring concert, when faded_lace and I got to talking about what would happen if B.I.Shadow went clubbing together, and then what Fuma and Hokuto might get up to afterwards... Of course, writing it took me way longer than it should

Comments

[heartsweet205]

Aaaaw I loved it, this pairing is definitively one of the best ever ♥ And, it was sooo cute too !

[yomimashou]

I'm glad you liked it :D And I'm so happy to find other Hokuto/Fuma fans~

[heartsweet205]

You're welcome ! I'm happy to find Hokuto/Fuma's fiction too x)

[ext_1497137]

oh this is beautiful. i really, really love the atmosphere you created here with their relationship and how fuuma was so nervous to take the lead for hokku's birthday. also hot. *_____________*

[yomimashou]

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it~

[mousapelli]

this is so sweet and good, and I really enjoyed it!

[yomimashou]

Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it :D

[faded_lace]

"I can't think of a better present than seeing my boyfriend so happy," he said, and when Fuma blushed and smiled shyly and said that he might have another present for Hokuto later, well, Hokuto didn't think any alcoholic drink could make his head spin and his face flush quite the way Fuma could.
I love this line *___* I love the way you describe Hokuto's feelings and reactions to Fuma in general, because he's just so starry-eyed with love over Fuma all the time, and I think you capture that perfectly here. I also love the scene at the end, where they're waking up, because it's so cute and sweet and I can just picture it... and of course everything in between was great and hot, too ^__~

And I really like how you chose to write Fuma's name a lot in narrative rather than pronouns, sort of mirroring Hokuto's thought about him and how just... flustered and overwhelmed with his love for Fuma he was throughout the whole thing? Basically, I loved every moment of this! ♥

[yomimashou]

I'm so glad you liked it ♥ Hokuto is just so in love with Fuma, so I'm really happy that came across in the fic~ And I'm glad you liked the end, too... Hokuto and Fuma cuddling is adorable, so I'm glad I managed to capture that a little bit.

And I really can't thank you enough for all your help while I was writing this ♥♥