Teach me how to dance 3/11

Oct 08, 2010 22:45


a/n: In the first chapter I wrote 3rd person and in the second chapter I wrote 1st person~ I'm just gonna change it up whenever I feel like one POV works better for the chapter! Okay hope it's pretty good, this one's longer than the other 2 :)

thank you for reading! <3

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"Of course the door's locked," I whisper to myself. The sun's ( Read more... )

jonghyun, minho, key, 2min, teach me how to dance, shinee, yokomya, taemin, jongkey

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yokomya October 9 2010, 03:04:18 UTC
SPOT FOR TAEMINRAPE ;~;

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yokomya October 9 2010, 04:22:15 UTC
lmfaoooo so true XDDD
he be rapin' key like idk wut.
I'm glad you liked it ehe ;DDDD
sarang.

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yokomya October 9 2010, 04:23:26 UTC
Thank you, it doesn't feel very interesting to me though :/
Who's retarded, Minho or Taemin? xD
I know, poor Minnie <3
thank you :)))

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anonymous October 9 2010, 06:11:17 UTC
I guess its because it isnt draggy and stuff.
Besides, its only the third chapter. Dont be too hard on yourself.
Minho's the retarded one.
But then again, you can't explain attraction. XD
poor minnie mouse.

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yokomya October 9 2010, 23:52:43 UTC
I know I need to speed things up XDDD
thank you :))) <3

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yokomya October 9 2010, 23:56:20 UTC
thank you!!
lol I know I'm having too much fun with the 2min part of this story XDDD <3

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angel_khul October 9 2010, 10:24:20 UTC
wow really I liked it a lot.... I will be waiting for the next Cha... update soon pleas...

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yokomya October 9 2010, 23:56:58 UTC
thank you! :))
omg /glomps bunny chan
I love bunnies.
js.
<3

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