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[yohorum]

Today...I *really* want to write a song! Too bad I'm not good enough to improvise. Not only can't I compose, but I can't even turn out a song-worthy poem. They always sounds either too angst ridden, in which case, I would have to scream the lyrics; or they sound too cute to put to chords, in which case I would have to know how to synthesize some

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[ragincanucksfan]

ha mander i still play bass and ive always been one for lyrics we should write stuff

[yohorum]

lol I think I wrote a pretty good song...sorta. Here. Tell me what ya think...doesn't really rhyme too much, but kinda flows along.
-It's a nice day for a trip to the ocean
but lets not take the car cause I can't handle the motion, yeah it makes me ill against my will.
So I'd rather walk with you...
We'd stroll hand in hand with our jeans rolled up,
we'd paint in the sand till the tide washes it away..
Then we'd stay and watch the sun dive beneathe the sea and
when the last rays of the day illuminate your skin,
it seems so perfect that you lean in-so close to me and sing...
"Ohh yeah Oh oh..please stay here with me."-

[anonymous]

I wana hear more of your work. Anyways. I have work I did too. tell me if you like it, its on my xanga

http://www.xanga.com/Charlie_Eats_Noobs

I look soo dark in the pic, and I love it!