Fic: Roses

[yogurtpo3]

Ficlet: Roses
Author: yogurtpo3
Word Count: 1268 (is that still a ficlet?)
Spoilers: Mild season 5
Pairings: Gees... Spoilers!
Disclaimer: I own nothing... or aren't getting paid for nothing anyway...
Author’s Notes:
Unbeta-ed, so I apologize in advance for crappy grammar...
Also, please scroll down after the fic (very relevant)! ^^

Comments

[idioticonion]

He’d denied it, because maybe if you deny something enough times, it can stop being true.

That is total Barney logic isn't it? God, it's so him.

smiling awkwardly at Don to cover the blush she could feel creeping into her cheeks as she walked out the sliding doors.

Oh GOD. DEAR GOD. You broke my heart.

And that art is adorable.

[yogurtpo3]

Yay!! I got the Don scribbled out icon!! :D
And sorry for heart breaking... :( Fic was totally inspired by art... so I couldn't make it a happy ending... yet! :)

[nnilann]

These are my favorite parts:

“Barney Stinson don’t do flowers, and he especially doesn’t do roses!”

"He smiled, somehow charming his way deep into her heart again. She hated that he had that power over her, the control over her heart when every instinct of her logical fibre was telling her this was a bad idea."

"Oh, God he can be such an idiot"

You do know how to write them :D

[yogurtpo3]

Thanks! Glad you liked it! :)

[i_sudoku]

Wow, you got me fooled to think that it was Barney talking to Robin until I was surprised to see Don said he read Barney's blog. Good misdirection!

[yogurtpo3]

Yay! It worked! :) I was actually having a hard time trying to make it seem like Barney, but also make it realistically, Don, since they're such different characters (one being most awesome and lovable... and the other being kinda blah! :P).

Thanks for commenting! :)

[i_sudoku]

Shame on me not to be able to differentiate awesome and blah characters :)

[yogurtpo3]

Haha, well, Barney does have a tendency to be less-than-his-awesome-self when he's head over heels in love with someone awesome like Scherbatsky! :)