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yoake_no_sora

Memento Vivere - Part III

Mar 06, 2013 13:55

( Part III )

pairing: tao/kris, rating:pg-13, pairing: baekhyun/chanyeol, pairing: chen/xiu min, pairing: sehun/lu han, pairing: suho/lay, pairing: kai/kyungsoo, pairing: kris/lay, fanfic

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swabluu March 7 2013, 03:53:58 UTC

SPOTEU SCREAMS 25K!!!!

swabluu March 9 2013, 02:56:08 UTC

OMFG YOU ARE SUCH A PERFECT WRITER IT’S NOT FAIR I’M CRYING BECAUSE GDI HOW DO YOU PERFECT ( ... )

swabluu March 9 2013, 02:57:03 UTC

““Wow, that was climactic,” remarked Yixing in a sarcastic drone into the uncomfortable silence. “I expected something dramatic like running into each others’ arms while declaring your love to the world, perhaps with the accompaniment of background music and a spotlight. I’m sure Chanyeol and Baekhyun wouldn’t mind contributing to that; Chanyeol loves gossiping about you two.”” Crying omfg I am so done ( ... )

yoake_no_sora March 15 2013, 16:38:03 UTC

Omg. Your 761 word comment :O
What perfect? I'm not! >< But thank you~ I just really wanted a FinalFantasy!AU because MAMA is so perfect for it and all of SM Town somehow managed to be part of the AU too! :D
YES HUNHAN! I NEED MORE HUNHAN IN MY LIFE SO I FABRICATE IT IN FICTION.
“Sehun ducked his head down, pressing his forehead into the rough fabric of his pants, and closed his eyes.” I’M SORRY I READ THIS IN A REALLY WRONG WAY JUST SO YOU KNOW omg, I didn't even think of that. o_o
OTPs EVERYWHERE O U O (and Chanyeol totally ships HunHan. They all do.)
I feel bad that Minseok's primary role in this was being a victim TT_TT
FIGHTING SCENES ARE THE WORST. THE WHOLE TIME I JUST WANTED TO GO "SEHUN POKED HIM WITH HIS SWORD AND HE TOPPLED OVER ON THE FLOOR".
Yay~ Sehun lives~ OUO Can't have HunHan without Sehun, after all~

Thank you, Bluu~~~<3

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yoake_no_sora March 24 2013, 17:14:36 UTC

at the beginning i honestly thought hunhan were together alr, and luhan was just being discreet BUT HAHA OK, YOU TWO THICK HEADS--
Haha. The rest of Exo feels your pain. U_U

Doing that to Minseok hurts my heart ;n; So I just needed Baekyeol to make it just a little bit better. They are wonderful comic relief.

Hehe, oops. I hope I didn't scare you too much about Sehun. :P

Sehun being all angsty is quite hot. (>U<)

Thank you so much! I don't deserve such praise but I am extremely honoured!

paranoiascreams March 7 2013, 16:48:46 UTC

I'm screaming because damnit final fantasy. I'm an FF geek forever.

yoake_no_sora March 15 2013, 16:38:50 UTC

MAMA!AU calls for FF, tbh OUO

paranoiascreams March 15 2013, 18:36:34 UTC

That's true. XD Chanyeol and Kris are summoning beasts from whatever. That's screaming FF already. XD

yoake_no_sora March 18 2013, 01:37:16 UTC

I should have added those! OTL Oh well. It can't be helped. (I need a MAMA video game. And Square Enix should make it. That would complete my life.)

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yoake_no_sora April 10 2013, 01:50:46 UTC

Baekyeol and Hunhan are always disgusting together haha. AND SHINEE ARE DBSK'S BABIES.

Thank you jie jie~~~ <3

envybleedsgreen March 9 2013, 02:11:41 UTC

SPOT.