[fic] broken-like stars.

Nov 13, 2007 22:09

TVXQ FIC!

OK, so I wanted to write doppelgänger!Chun because mimei waaanted and her doppelgänger!Su fic was absolute pwnage. Though, like most things, it didn't quite work out. Here goes anyway though~

TVXQ.
400w approx.
angst. angst. angst. & no pairings. just Chun.

There’s smashed glass glittering everywhere like stars. )

mimei, tvxq/dbsg/thsk love, fics

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mimei November 13 2007, 22:29:00 UTC
okay. what. you almost made me cry.

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mimei November 13 2007, 22:31:44 UTC
um. & that comment sucks. sry. *blames the almost-crying-ness*

ugh. this was clever. i was expecting doppelganger doppelganger not all-too-real this v. that type juxtaposition. and Yoochun's voice. and his skinniness. and insomnia. and mirrors. oh man. thank you (or. something. idek. flaps.) ;a;

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ymela November 13 2007, 22:37:35 UTC
It's okay. I'm sure there have been much worse. :3

I couldn't seem to manage to justify an actual doppelganger so it ended up that way, I guess. And no need to be thanking me.♥

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mimei November 13 2007, 22:44:53 UTC
yeah it could've been "YOOSU IS SO CUTE. THIS MADE ME SMILE, SMILE AND SMILE. I LOVE IT." ....okay, i'm going to stop quoting people who are kind enough to read and comment on my fic. really. i am a terrible person.

ugh, justifying doppelganger fic is impossible. when i was halfway through the Had we but world.. i realised it would be so much cooler is double Su was all in Su's head but it was too late and. yes. you are too clever, iris :(

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applesu November 14 2007, 13:43:19 UTC
*stutters* wow. painful, and kind of... disturbingly beautiful. but then again, I'm awful at reading into things. forgive me?.

He is smashed glass. He is seven years worth of bad luck
^ that is genius! I really like that.

*snaffles the Chunbuns* this is reallyreallyreally good and *mems* yes.

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ymela November 14 2007, 22:36:20 UTC
I am wow'ed by the reaction now. you are forgiven, though i'm not sure why you need forgiveness~

*blushes lots* I'm reallyreallyreally glad you liked it. :D

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_pockygirl January 17 2008, 12:17:53 UTC
i'm stunned at how much emotion you can bring out in such a short space

i like how you bring out the faults so raw and exposed

but they're what makes yoochun perfect ♥

the end gives me shivers ♥♥

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