Yay! I'm just happy to get a review thing and I'm glad you liked it. Not one of my best, IMO, but I'm pleased with it. So yeah, thanks for the review...
I'm curious, though, I know this is a bit strange to ask... and I don't mean to make you go out and read my stuff or anything but... have you read/what did you think of Bodies of Evidence, as that's more your style and I kinda wondered what you'd think of it... Just curious...
Wow, really poignant. That last section gave me chills.
The only thing that really didn't fit for me was in the first section using the word "tit." We're looking at a sweet scene of a baby and his mother, and "tit" just has too dirty a ring to it to really fit. Kind of jerked me out of the mood. But otherwise, really really nice.
Thanks! I'll change that word to 'breast' or something. I think I used that word to give it a more viscal feel, like this was right back at the beginning before there is any dignaty to the situation. But yeah, I'm very glad you liked! And thanks double for the feedback, feedback is always good!
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The only thing that really didn't fit for me was in the first section using the word "tit." We're looking at a sweet scene of a baby and his mother, and "tit" just has too dirty a ring to it to really fit. Kind of jerked me out of the mood. But otherwise, really really nice.
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