The Sun In Your Hands - Damon/Elena - Angst - PG - 1/1

[force_oblique]

Title: The Sun In Your Hands
Author: force-oblique
Fandom: The Vampire Diaries
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: I don't own anything! :P
Characters/Pairings: Damon-centric (pov), Elena/Damon
Spoilers/Warnings: Based on the tv-show, spoiler for last Elena/Stefan and Elena/Damon scene in 2x06.
Summary:Even if you can't share her love, if you cant taste her lips, you are

Comments

[persephone_20]

Amazing. I really loved this. I had no idea that you would bring so much out of this 30 seconds...

I loved this description the most: And there she is walking like a dead person reanimated by despair, she seems like she would crawl if it didn't attract attention or pity.

I think though, hon, you might have left italics on accidentally.

[force_oblique]

Really?
Thanks so much!
I'm really happy you liked this!
I wasn't sure you would... I thought it might be a little too much!
But yeah I could have 10 seconds with Damon and still write 2000 words!
He affects me sooo much! *swoons* lol

Oops! :S
Yes, I just corrected it! XD
Thanks again!

[cila81]

This was amazing! Incredibly well written. I loved it. :D

[force_oblique]

Thanks so much for commenting!
I'm glad you liked it! :)

[bleu_marine_2]

Awesome. I loved that scene. Everything you described, I felt going through Damon's mind. Though I did think he had eavesdropped on Elena's and Stefan's conversation. But I think you are right. Even if he did, he stopped, because he was surprised to see Elena crying. He didn't know.

Everything, the self-loathing, the empathy he feels for what Elena feels, I saw all of that and you described it all so well. I hope this was a turning point for Damon. That he finally understood his impulsiveness is costing him what he wants the most. That this part of him wasn't even his to begin with. It was planted there by Katherine and grew out of necessity and out of proportion so he could survive waiting for her for so long. That he needs to let go and find himself again.

And I just hope that then, not too long from now, Elena will realize she has his sun in her hands. Thank you for expressing it all so beautifully.

[force_oblique]

Wow, thanks so much for your comment!
I'm so glad you think it was accurate and insightful.
It is exactly what I thought was going through Damon's mind at that moment.
I could almost feel his heart breaking again and I had to write it, you know?

I really hope we can see Damon evolve and let go of his past and everything that has been holding him back from being who he truly is!!

Thanks again, I am glad you liked it!

[lostandalone22]

Great story!

[force_oblique]

Thanks Tori!
I'm glad you liked it! :)
Thanks for commenting.

I will make a point of writing something at least a little slashy just for you! :)