That was sooooooo amazing sweetie. I'm really touched by the dedication^^ The second part is really my favorite especially this part:
"I didn't jump because I was scared," James says, matter of factly. He sits up, and stares out of the window. "I ain't a coward, and I sure as hell would have jumped anywhere, if I could get you home safe."
love thisemilyanna07February 10 2010, 23:02:26 UTC
I absolutely love this. Everything was right on. I hope you add more, but even if you don't, I highly suggest posting this on fanfiction.net. Also, www.Skatefiction.com is a great place for this. There's a fairly large selection of Skate fanfiction on ffn but it's been slow lately and a lot of suliet fans have been posting. If you want help setting up an account for either, let me know. But yeah, this is great!
But could Juliet ever compare to her? Heck no. He needed her, to get over losing his one true love.
"I didn't jump because I was scared," James says, matter of factly. He sits up, and stares out of the window. "I ain't a coward, and I sure as hell would have jumped anywhere, if I could get you home safe."
WOOOOOOOOOOOOW. OMG hun, that last part almost killed me. That's what I think happened as well. I think he jumped so she could have a chance to go back. I would love loooooove to see some sort of scene like this on Lost ♥
OMG I love this!! And to think that it is partly dedicated to me! Awwws! Thanks so much hunni. I think you got perfect characterization and I just loved how deep into their heads and hearts you really went!!
I ain’t sorry. I’m glad I got a good look of you. Awesome awesome awesome!
Hehe Kelly Ive been waiting to see what you think, half anxious that you might not like it! :p Hehe well i always like to write skate so its my pleasure LOL!
Thanks so much, I always try and give reasons for why they do certain things and say certain things, because i guess sometimes you can miss what they mean and it adds such great depth. Although I am not saying the show is bad in anyway, lol
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"I didn't jump because I was scared," James says, matter of factly. He sits up, and stares out of the window. "I ain't a coward, and I sure as hell would have jumped anywhere, if I could get you home safe."
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Im glad you liked it. Its what I hoped James would say to her.
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I dont think I'll post there, just because I dont really use the sites but ty for the suggestion :)
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"I didn't jump because I was scared," James says, matter of factly. He sits up, and stares out of the window. "I ain't a coward, and I sure as hell would have jumped anywhere, if I could get you home safe."
WOOOOOOOOOOOOW. OMG hun, that last part almost killed me. That's what I think happened as well. I think he jumped so she could have a chance to go back. I would love loooooove to see some sort of scene like this on Lost ♥
Amazing fic *-*
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I wasnt sure about some of the lines I wrote, but in the end I kept them because it seemed to fit. So I'm glad you liked those particular lines.
I feel like we've been waiting so long for a scene like that or the one in 6x03 where finally they have a heart to heart.
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And to think that it is partly dedicated to me! Awwws!
Thanks so much hunni. I think you got perfect characterization and I just loved how deep into their heads and hearts you really went!!
I ain’t sorry. I’m glad I got a good look of you.
Awesome awesome awesome!
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Hehe well i always like to write skate so its my pleasure LOL!
Thanks so much, I always try and give reasons for why they do certain things and say certain things, because i guess sometimes you can miss what they mean and it adds such great depth. Although I am not saying the show is bad in anyway, lol
♥ Ty!
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