Fic: When I Have Fears (1/1)

[yixsh]

Title: When I Have Fears
Pairings/Characters: Alfons/OC, Edward
Rating: M/R
Genre: Drama, Angst
Spoilers: Spoilers for the whole series and the movie.
Word Count: +/- 6300
Warnings: Language and brief mentions of sex.
Summary:  Alfons Heiderich tries to balance love and lust and fame and time -- and finds it a very hard thing to do.

Notes: I read the poem

Comments

[syolen]

Ooooh, awesome characterization of Alfons ! I really liked it :)

[dreamer1789]

Awesome charactization! Really interesting to see the evolution Alfons goes through, only to end up more or less back at square one, just with more life experience.

Edward was such a wonderful roommate, but he did not have breasts like that, I lol'd at this and people wondered. ^_^

The attention that goes out to Alfons' illness really gets to you. All stark confrontation and the truth of an early death literally staring him in the face. Also, much love for the OC, with her pros and cons ^^ and the effect she has on Alfons.

Great fic! XD

[militsa]