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Poetry

Feb 09, 2002 00:20

Friends ( Read more... )

Comments 6

raen February 9 2002, 23:56:48 UTC

fav lines ---> A friend is there for good and for bad.
A friend can always tell when your lying or mad.
A friend is someone who offers you advice,
Whether you think you need it or not.
Their not afraid to tell you what they see that you that you don't.
A friend is there no matter what you do.

very beautiful poems btw. :D

yinswritings February 10 2002, 12:55:34 UTC

Thanks, I was actually depressed when I wrote them believe it or not, and my ex boyfriend whom I tried to remain friends with had told me he wanted my friendship which I was giving and he stated that he wanted it on is terms. I wrote the one poem because that to me is what friend ship is. Not ok we can be friends on my terms. I have several others, just not sure where the are at this moment. Someone went and deleted stuff of of my puter so hopefully the are on a disk.

I have a few more ideas and a short story in my head as well. Glad you like them though :) I needed some positive feedback for once.

i wanted to share raen February 13 2002, 08:36:22 UTC

Butterflies ( ... )

Re: i wanted to share yinrycher February 13 2002, 09:08:41 UTC

If you want, you can now post it as an entry :)

I think I need to work on the layout of this one some though.

strange_dream February 15 2002, 10:29:27 UTC

I wish I could write poems like you guys! You both have so much talent it's insane! I can't wait to read more poems that you have written. All my poems end up Roses are Red Violets are Blue....yadda yadda yadda, nothing quite as beautiful as you guys have written!

yinrycher February 15 2002, 12:08:33 UTC

And see I often wonder if I can write at all half the time lol.