[Fanfic] other boy chapter 1 [Code Geass, Suzaku/C.C., NC-17, WIP ]

[yinake]

Fandom: Code Geass
Title: other boy
Pairing: Suzaku/C.C.
Word Count: 8,000-ish? I was actually going to post the first 10,000 words of this, but they regrettably didn't fit. Um, LJ, character limit expansion?   Total word count typed up so far: 20,000. Expected final word count: 30,000-ish.
Rating: NC-17 for sex, language, mature content, and some

Comments

[drakyndra]

I can't believe you dedicated this to me. ♥ ♥

It's an interesting set-up for a relationship, being that it's almost completely in reverse - sex comes first, then affection starts being brought into it.

And while it starts out being all about Lelouch, even if there is a pointed dearth of characters mentioning his name (incidentally, it amused me that C.C. wondered about Suzaku and Lelouch) it soon becomes something of it's own.

Next chapter sounds interesting. ;)

I do hope you actually get this finished; there's something deeply depressing about really interesting, original fic lying there unfinished.

[yinake]

In my head, it's totally canon that C.C. somehow in some way ships Suzaku/Lelouch.

Or at least, she'd love to watch. XD

[drakyndra]

I like to imagine C.C. trolling Lelouch by writing fic about them on his computer, and then leaving the window open when he enters the room to read.

I'm fairly certain she;d point out some of their more homoerotic moments, even if just for the lulz.

[debilitate]

Mmmm, this is so very well written and fits in well with each depicted character's personalities. Suzaku x C.C. has always been a guilty pleasure of mine, and I'm glad to see a story of it, and the intricacies and complications you've woven into the story.

I can't wait for a next chapter!

[yinake]

Pleasure to see you commenting!

I've seen you around the nets a few times, mostly on friends' blogs and Persona forums, I think... wonderful to see a familiar face. ^_^ (Also, this is neither here nor there, but i just finished P4 and am on a massive gushing trip lol).

Thanks for that lovely review; it always makes me happy when people say my stuff is well-written. I-I might not necessarily agree, but is nice. Heh. ^^

[debilitate]

Oh, haha, really? Didn't think I'd be known enough, even with the posts to comms and friends... But, yes, I have seen you before, and have seen some of your writing. You write well, EVEN IF YOU MIGHT NO "NECESSARILY AGREE"! (And, mmm, P4. Did you get the true ending?)

You're very welcome. Glad to contribute.

[yinake]

I think it's mostly because of your unique nick that I noticed you a lot. But yes, I have seen you around. I think most recently on my husbando's lj (Yami). XD;

I did get the true ending, in fact. Like, pfff, I was already spoiled to the bahoozas about everything that happened anywhozle, so I used a guide. Here's my P4 gushing post after I finished the game: http://yinake.livejournal.com/50787.html. Also known as that post in which Yina checked her brain out at the door and mentally reverted back to 14.

I'm surprised I even managed to write this considering I'm all PERSONA PERSONA YOSUKE PERSONA YOOOSUKE PERSONA fuck where's my controller right now. But I DISGRESS.

[yinake]

Thanks, hon, it was actually the Suzaku/C.C. bit in your Requiem fic that inspired this, like a year ago. I thought I'd spin the idea a bit further. So thanks for that chapter! <333 *lol after she's already stolen the idea and everything*

[bobateababy16]

WOW I really enjoyed looking forward to updates.

[fantasygirl49]

thanks for sharing such an interesting fic, it's rare to see a suzaku/cc fic and u writing is so good :D