DAY FOUR ★ sweater weather

Nov 09, 2015 20:54

Username: carcharias1130
Prompt #: 215 [prompt details]Yifan doesn't know where all his favorite shirts and sweaters go to until Baekhyun suddenly straddles him one cold day with only a sweater on and rides him like his life depends on it.
Title: sweater weather
Ship: Baekhyun/Yifan
Side ship: None, though there could be a loose stealth ship depending on your interpretation
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day 04, *fanfiction, ship: baekhyun/yifan, rating: nc-17

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baekmebacon November 10 2015, 03:38:14 UTC
this is so great god bless your soul god bless nc-17 dometic!au krisbaek all is good

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carcharias1130 November 27 2015, 13:36:23 UTC
Thank you!! Thanks for reading and your lovely comment, I'm glad you enjoyed. <3

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xo_thefirst November 10 2015, 03:47:24 UTC
I'M SCREAMING IT'S MY PROMPT BRB

okay so. can i just say i love you, you amazing writer you. this is everything i wanted and so much more? i didn't expect anyone to pick this prompt honestly, and it makes me so happy that you chose it because it just had to be written. like bless.

omg i seriously love the fact kris is a professional wedding planner and that there's a luhan/unknown(?) hint ship too. i feel like you caught all the little details perfectly and even included things in here i didn't even know i wanted in this story.

Baekhyun had said he hadn’t seen it (or at least, that’s what his sleepy mumbling from the bed had sounded like), and Kris didn’t have time to really search, so he’d chosen another, less nice sweater and worn the peacoat to compensate.so mu ch dOMESTIC IN ONE SENTENCE idK I JUST LOVED THIS SENTENCE IDK WHY this scene just seemed so real and it made everything else sound so real like it hURTS i need krisbaek back in my life in front of me being all disgustingly cute and flirting and i'm going off topic ( ... )

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carcharias1130 November 27 2015, 14:15:10 UTC
I'M REALLY HAPPY YOU LOVED IT!! I can't believe you didn't expect anyone to pick this prompt, but maybe I'm biased. I saw it, was going to wait to see if someone would grab it because this was my first time writing smut, and //can I write smut??// but then I decided I couldn't risk it not being written, and so here we are.

I'm really glad you thought it was domestic enough!! I know you wanted domestic winter fluff and I wasn't sure if it was enough. And don't worry; your comment was so lovely. Again, I'm so glad you liked it!! Thank you for prompting this, I had so much fun writing it. <3 <3 <3

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xo_thefirst December 1 2015, 04:42:28 UTC
i honestly can't believe this is your first time writing smut-- and for my prompt too. it's so good, you can definitely write more in the future, haha. i loved everything about it and your story of how you came upon and chose it <3

it really was! the domestic fluff wasn't over the top and it felt just right for the little world you set them in, perfect even. i'm just in love with it. ( i'll stop now, haha. ) i'm glad you had fun writing it <333

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brittlepin November 10 2015, 07:34:16 UTC
“Oh no, no I think I’m keeping this on. It’s warm and soft and expensive,” Baekhyun says, leering. “Plus, I think you like it, how it makes me look all virginal and naughty.” --kris wasn't the only one spluttering after that. Baekhyun you sly thing asdhafmnladjalsd

“Oooh, Mr. Wu, ravish me, ooh,” --lmao.
no.
/dies

i saw the krisbaek tag, saw the /sweater/ and came here so fast istg my mother would be ashamed.
now i am in bliss~ krisbaek domestic is life ♥ baekhyun in oversized tops is life too ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

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carcharias1130 November 27 2015, 13:37:50 UTC
Haha, thanks, I'm particularly proud of the "virginal and naughty" line. :P Thank you so much for reading and commenting!! <3 I'm glad you liked it~

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slowdownspeedup November 10 2015, 17:02:14 UTC
THAT WAS SO MUCH FUN AND SMEXY!
I sooo love sassy Baek! ♡
Yifan is so easy tsk tsk XD
I love the domestic relationship they have going on. Ah, it feels so homey! I really love it!

Thank you so much, author-nim!

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carcharias1130 November 27 2015, 14:02:57 UTC
(Yifan is so easy for Baek, and I can't blame him. XD ) Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I'm glad you loved it!! <3 <3

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thesockmonster November 11 2015, 17:19:10 UTC
Man, now I'm in the mood for hot chocolate.

This was perfect from start to finish. I adore the way you wrote them together and Baekhyun is the most wonderful little shit ever.

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carcharias1130 November 27 2015, 13:46:05 UTC
Oh my gosh, I'm glad you liked it!! ;; Little shit Baekhyun is the best, and I'm glad you thought they worked together. Thanks for reading and commenting! <3

(Always a good time for hot chocolate, I hope you treated yourself).

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