Alone Upon the Threshold, part II

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TITLE: Alone Upon the Threshold, part II
RATING: PG-13 (for vague character death and swearing)
CHARACTERS: NEWS, KAT-TUN, Kanjani8
WORD COUNT: 5,012
SUMMARY: Gangs are never idle for long.
NOTES: Passages entirely in italics = flashback. Conclusion to the yakuza!verse drabbles.

Comments

[epicwaters]

omg.. you actually added to it lol finished it maybe!? I dunno I'll comment again when I finish reading it! how nice to see this at the top of my flist!

[epicwaters]

ahh... backstory. love backstory. find it kind of sentimental that it was ryo who went to warn kantou. it was sad the way they broke up. murakami needs to get his brain checked. but his personality though.. I guess if you're the leader behind something that failed horribly, you'd find a way to not have it be your fault. is it wrong that I kind of smiled that they argued over money? lol I liked it. thanks for continuing and finishing it. :D

[yey_yey]

It was a lot easier to write this than I thought it was going to be! The outline was huge though. Several pages. And I hand wrote it. Because everything should be written ;D

Hina is kind of insane >_< And I think Maruyama too. They just kind of turned out that way.

On the inside, Ryo is soft and fluffy, so he couldn't watch them actually get killed ♥

[shangrilove]

Zomg. The really really vague Nishikato ♥♥♥ and the koyato ♥♥♥♥♥♥.

You're done this installment? *cries

What I really liked in this story is your portrayal of Ohkura and Ryo. Ohkura seemed so cool, the quiet guy who can voice his opinion. And Ryo coming to warn Kantou. ♥ But he couldn't speak up when they were going to shoot Shige. Ryo was really well written character because he was so perfectly flawed. ♥♥♥

[yey_yey]

I wanted to put more Koyato in, but it was hard!! I don't think I'm very good at writing it was anything more than platonic...
But the Nishikato wormed its way in and I was like, "Wait. WTF. This isn't whore!verse."

This whole situation is super not-plausible, but I think Ryo and Ohkura would be the ones who'd do something about the other's stepping out of line. Cause Ryo is super BFFs with Jin and Pi, and Ohkura is friends with Nakamaru. The others... um, I feel like there's not much a connection...
So Ryo and Ohkura to the rescue XD

[shangrilove]

What? Ohkura's close with Maru? What is this?

I heard that Yasuda and Ueda are pretty close as well. Apparently they play guitar together or something.

Inspiration for a third installment? XD. Its ok if you don't really write more for this. It basically sums up pretty well. whereas in whore!verse i want shige to go to a k8 concert just so ryo can flail and be all nervous

[yey_yey]

I read some absurdly long jweb of Ohkura's and all he talked about was Nakamaru.

I didn't know about Ueda and Yasuda! All these secret little friendship we don't know about XD

I need to write a Shige-and-K8 whore!verse chapter so badly. But it's so hard for some reason. Ryo would flail so hard he'd fall off the stage or something.

[mujun]

This is one of my favorite AUs! I know you've resolved it pretty neatly, but will you keep writing it?

[yey_yey]

What?! More?!
I thought this was going to settle everything!

Um, I don't really know what else to write for this AU. I'm open to the possibility of continuing, but we'll have to see if inspiration strikes ;]

[ayumwu]

OH MY GOD. This is so good. Evil!Hina and Lackey!Maru and Lackey!Yoko. Oh wow. Never thought K8 would be separated like this.

But I'm glad Ohkura chose the right side. T.T

AND YAY. There's a continuation.

[yey_yey]

Ohkura is the more outspoken voice of reason :D

[ayumwu]

*makes kissy faces at Ohkura* XD

*squishes Ohkura* HAHA, I know how to do nothing but squish people. XDDD

[chibi15]

LOVED IT! Great story! It's so real! <3

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Thank you! :D ♥