fields of gold

[nuits_froides]

title: fields of gold
rating: pg/pg-13
summary: voices rang in my ears as I placed the pillow over my head; thundering footsteps that pounded unforgivably on the wood flooring and she started to cry. i bit my lips, a metallic taste that numbed my mouth as i felt his arms around me.
notes: creative nonfiction; original fic
word count: 1,747.

Comments

[lastupenda]

this was gorgeous, gabby.
and extremely tragic but i sensed a bit of hope towards the end, that maybe death isn't so bad after all. or maybe i'm reading this wrong.

a very good original fic bb. keep at it. <3

[nuits_froides]

thanks evelynn.

i still don't like it.
something is just off idk.