you must've fallen from the sky.

[decolletages]

title: you must've fallen from the sky.
rating: teen
summary: night after night becca flies all over town with camilla, dressed in clothing considered scandal-worthy in her old town.
notes: written for inrevelations  challenge #5 (quotes) & memories_child .

Comments

[theepiccek]

I really enjoyed this. It's a little bit heartbreaking.

[decolletages]

thank you!
i felt like it was rather rushed, but i tried my best.

[lusimeles]

Oh, yikes. What a powerful story - my mind is blown, especially because I know a lot of girls like Rebecca! You managed to convey so much with relatively little prose (I am always so envious of people who can do that, guh), and I loved all the characters - even though you gave fairly brief sketches of each, idk, it felt like they were very informative brief sketches, if that makes any sense. I know a Camilla and a Rebecca too, so - yes, definitely really well done *___*

[memories_child]

Oh thank you for this. I really liked it, and it fits with the quote really well. You get a real sense of the characters and the situation, even though the prose itself is very minimal. It works well =)

[sammy___]

I know this is old, but I somehow stumbled upon it
and it is stunning ♥