Comments | yesungsroom: SSAnswer mv fic:: Realize the Heat

ddangkkoma in yesungsroom

SSAnswer mv fic:: Realize the Heat

Dec 11, 2009 10:57

Title: Realize the Heat
Rating:... NC-17
Pairing: Yewook
Summary: ... I'm satisfied with just you.

( 'I thought you said you would be right down.' )

otp:yesung/ryeowook, rating:nc-17, fandom:super junior

Comments 48

thundersquall December 11 2009, 16:03:35 UTC

OH, OH, OH. OH GOD. I LOVE THIS. HYUUUUNG! This is perfect. Slow and sensual and sexy and totally keeping with the mood of the song, and yet somehow so... sweet? Sweet and romantic and fluffy with Jongwoon knowing just how to settle Ryeowook, and the ending, urgh, so sweet!

The high begins to dwindle and Ryeowook notes how Jongwoon is frozen. He'd been so far gone he hadn't paid any mind to Jongwoon. 'Do you want me to-'

'Shh, let me just stay like this another minute.'

So they stay still, Ryeowook's legs locked around Jongwoons waist and Jongwoon's arms holding him while they taste each other.

This whole part made me half-wibble with how sweet they are, and half-die with the hot. I HOPE YOU'RE HAPPY NOW, OMG. I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! ♥

oatmeal_peril December 11 2009, 16:21:36 UTC

Ooooh, I really like it!
Beautifully written, the imagery's really vivid; good job ^^v

ddangkkoma December 11 2009, 16:59:39 UTC

thank youuu

i'm glad you liked the imagery. i was killing myself to try and make it get across well to the reader

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ddangkkoma December 11 2009, 16:56:22 UTC

OMG THANK YOU SO MUCH.

i'm glad that the sweetness of it got to you. i didn't want it to seem smutty or too hardcore since i was trying to portray the slower beat of the music.

you have no idea how much your comment alone is making me smile

cherrybombb December 11 2009, 16:40:50 UTC

this is it isn't it?
THIS.IS.IT 8D you just compile all the scenes into one and oh lawl, jongwoon's a lil bit too gentle here. Was expecting books to be knocked off shelves and the alike xDD
Still, well written bb =D

ddangkkoma December 11 2009, 16:54:57 UTC

XD oh the sexy whore smut is being written by someone else lol

i'm glad you liked it since you helped me write a few lines when i was stuck last night :3

whale667 December 11 2009, 19:12:19 UTC

this is beautifully written! the visuals are great!
it's just how the mv is.

it's like smut, but not smut.
ahhh! i love it :)

ddangkkoma December 11 2009, 19:22:27 UTC

i had the mv on line repeat for over an hour. i kept freezing it on certain parts to kinda stick to the exact mv visuals so i'm glad it paid off. thank you so much for reading.

and i'm glad you didn't think it was smutty XD