Day and Night (Nikaido/Senga, PG-13)

[yeska_noka]

Title: Day and Night
Character/Pairing: Nikaido/Senga
Rating/Warnings: PG-13, dub-con
Summary: In the dark of the night, sometimes the lines between right and wrong aren't always so clear.
AN: I started this about a year ago, and yararanger was helping me with it, but I could never get it to go where I wanted. She seemed to really like the idea though, so

Comments

[talisa_ahn]

Ooo... I really liked that. The change of POVs, the flow. Man, Senga's lucky Nika wasn't pissed.

[yeska_noka]

Yeah, the changing POV was kind of difficult, but necessary, I think. And Senga really IS lucky.

[yeska_noka]

Definitely wrong. But yay, I'm glad you think it's cute.

I have a really hard time with non-happy endings, so you won't see them from me much. *lol*

[loveandcoffee]

;_______________; this fic contained entirely too much love. Pretty sure I will reread it many times ♥.
So thanks to you for writing and to Pippa for unconsciously making you finish it :D

[yeska_noka]

Oh yay, I'm glad you liked it that much. :D

There are some fics out there that I go back and reread all the time. I've left like ten or more comments on the same fic (although I've read it probably more like a hundred times). ^^;

[loveandcoffee]

there's fics I have reread dozens of times... some of them I even made into pdf files and put in my ebook reader. XD; But the only one I commented on twice is bunnyfic I think (and I've reread it in its entirety at least 15 times)... the other ones, I made sure to comment once, but commenting more than once on a fic by someone I don't know would feel like spamming them :

[yeska_noka]

I guess I haven't really had that problem, because I think all of the fics I've loved enough to reread a billion times have all been by people I know, at least to some degree.

[mbdancer8o8]

So cute~
I'm dying right now. think I need to read it at least 10 more times before I sleep. *__*

“Well, not that one about the backstabbing, cheating girlfriend,” Senga explains. “But yeah, most of them.”

“Who was that about then?” Nikaido wants to know.

“No one. I just thought it would make a cool song.” Senga makes a face.

LOL. Favorite moment. :D

I also love the last line. =3

Oh Nika, why are you so dense? Poor Senga was waiting for you!

[yeska_noka]

Probably would have been better if Senga had just said something way back in the beginning. Of course, then Nika's subconscious couldn't have prepared him quite as well. So it works out, but it also works out sketchy. Thanks Senga. ;p

[yararanger]

AHHHH YOU FINISHED IT and it's so different but I do really like it a lot, omg Senga ;A; gah okay I will come back and leave a decent comment when I am not on a boat THANK YOU ♥♥♥♥♥♥

[yeska_noka]

I did! I never really expected to, because as much as we discussed it, it just WASN'T WORKING. I couldn't write out the fic that I originally wanted to, which was frustrating to no end. But then I felt bad about giving up entirely, and you said you expected NiSen from me and... well. I sat down to give it another try, and instead of fighting with it to do what I wanted, I just let it do what IT wanted. And then Mousi came in and I wrote a bunch of new stuff to fill in holes and reordered and fixed things and... well. A whole new fic, really. But I'm glad I was able to make something of this. :)

So thank you again for all your help originally. I hope it's turned into something you'll continue to enjoy. :)