Comments | yeska_noka: Don't You Wish Your Girlfriend Was Hot Like Me? (Yokoo/Senga, PG)

yeska_noka

Don't You Wish Your Girlfriend Was Hot Like Me? (Yokoo/Senga, PG)

Jul 15, 2010 21:26

Title: Don't You Wish Your Girlfriend Was Hot Like Me?
Pairing: Yokoo/Senga
Rating/Warnings: PG
AN: Because mousapelli said I had to finish it if I wanted more Miyata/Nika. A rare pair for a rare pair. This is unbetaed and I started it months and months ago, so I hope it doesn't seem choppy. I sometimes have trouble smoothing things out when I pick them up ( Read more... )

rating: pg, boy: yokoo wataru, group: kis-my-ft2, boy: senga kento, johnnys

Comments 22

kira_shadow July 15 2010, 12:46:07 UTC

truth be told as with all rare pairs the first reaction at seeing the pairing had me go "??" and wondering whether it would work but you made it work.

although I guess many people will wonder where Iida went in this story but for me that wasn't too noticeable...:3

I liked how you wrote Yokoo's thoughts, his reflections, opninions...how he'd be amused by the 2000 combo and then jealous...

and I loved the part where you wrote how senga lit up like the sun :D

the pairing is still odd but in the end it works...and yokoo is so sweet and haha old-fashioned :3 I love how they're argueing about how to treat your date and all XD "oh fine you're the girl" haha

♥

yeska_noka July 18 2010, 00:18:20 UTC

Pssh, Iida. Iida is his BFF and doesn't really affect how he views Senga at all, and he's already long-gone by the time Yokoo confesses (although possibly Iida is the only one Yokoo tells beforehad, and Iida probably LOLs a lot).

kira_shadow July 18 2010, 08:33:30 UTC

haha true that :]

cierra_james July 15 2010, 12:49:55 UTC

Awww, so cute. I had to bite my finger to stop from giggling and waking the whole house up.

I was worried Senga was channelling a bit to much Hasshi in the confession scene, but then he was all, I knew all along, "You're as obvious as you are dense." and Senga's personality shone through.

LMAo at Yokoo telling Senga he's the girl so deal with it and Senga just accepting in defference to Senpai.

What would be perfect next is an awkward Nika/Miyata + Yokoo/Senga double date fic.

yeska_noka July 18 2010, 00:19:19 UTC

Ooh, double date! And then Taipi would be like, wait, everyone's hanging out and I'm not invited?! And they'd all "..." at him and he'd curse the unfairness of the universe.

shimizumiki July 15 2010, 12:56:41 UTC

D'aaaw. They're adorable. XD

yeska_noka July 18 2010, 00:19:27 UTC

digindeeper July 15 2010, 16:00:32 UTC

I had reservations about this pairing, but you made it work! I like how you didn't dive straight into present day, but started back from way ages ago so we could track Yokoo's feelings towards Senga.

Love old-fashioned Yokoo. Love Senga's, "I want to." (hot!!!!), love that they just conclude that Senga's the girl therefore Yokoo pays, love that Senga calls Yokoo dense and obvious, lovelovelove.

This is slower paced than your other fics, I think, but I like it because it works and it flows and it's sweet and warm and adorable. :D:D:D:D:D

yeska_noka July 18 2010, 00:20:08 UTC

It was difficult to figure out how to make it work, but I'm glad you think it goes well. Thanks for reading. :D

1st_eggokage July 15 2010, 17:13:03 UTC

aaaaaa SO CUTE. I think I'm just a sucker for any pairings with Yokoo in them, lol. ♥

Surely one of them must turn out just average, and he thinks Miyata's got that covered, but then Miyata proves him wrong.

HAHAHAHA OH MIYACCHI, PULLING OUT THE HOTNESS CARD. how is he so impossibly gorgeous lately? I don't understaaaaaand. ._.

you saw no html fail, this is totally not my second comment, these are not the droids you're looking for. /HANDWAVE

yeska_noka July 18 2010, 00:20:34 UTC

Heh. Miyacchiiiiiii. Mmm.