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Unlock - Chapter Thirty-One

Feb 23, 2011 19:03

Title: Unlock
Authors: renichifreak and yeonah
Chapter: 31/?
Fandom: SS501, cameos by KARA
Pairings: KyuSaeng, HyunMin (may be other pairings in the future)
Rating: PG-16
Warning: Angst, AU, Fluff
Summary: Not everything is as it seems, and for those who are as far from normal as you can get, life is a bleak existence. The only ones who can truly understand ( Read more... )

pairing: kyujong/youngsaeng, roleplay: unlock, fandom: ss501, pairing: hyunjoong/jungmin, writing: roleplay, fandom: kara

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yeonah February 24 2011, 00:03:55 UTC

Spot for Carey~~~

renichifreak February 24 2011, 00:53:08 UTC

I love this one...the hyunmin was fun~

yeonah February 24 2011, 00:04:05 UTC

Spot for Curione~~~

curionenene February 28 2011, 00:28:18 UTC

i've grown to love this rp =3

i'm so glad saeng had kyu and his parents to help him through his bad periods now. and the hyunmin was just adorable XDDDD

min, quick! learn to control your power. I'm sure your overwhelming love for hyunjoong will make you learn quick! =D

and /sighs I keep clicking the wrong reply button lol

yeonah February 24 2011, 00:04:14 UTC

Spot for Kat!!! <3

yeonah February 24 2011, 00:04:22 UTC

Spot for Hyunae! <333

hyunaepark February 24 2011, 03:05:55 UTC

"...Love you, too," he whispered.

The long pause hurt more than it should have, and KyuJong berated himself mentally. It was too soon. Swallowing past the lump in his throat, he closed his eyes and continued to hum, doing what he could. There were slight noises through the rest of the house as everyone else started to wake up, his mother heading downstairs to start breakfast after a minute.

Noticing the small change, YoungSaeng realized what he must have done and pulled back to look him in the eyes. "I'm sorry...I love you so much, Kyu, but I don't...I'm so scared, and I don't know why," he tried to explain. "Please, don't be mad..." he pleaded, a few tears escaping.

I was so teary ;o;

but Hyunmin<3

yeonah February 24 2011, 00:04:33 UTC

Spot for NICA~~~~~

This. Is. Not. Fair. I. Want. Hyunmin. Nao. ameliorate23 February 24 2011, 01:02:33 UTC

"A little better..." YoungSaeng whispered, voice at about the level it had been when they'd first met, which matched the sad look in his eyes at the knowledge that he had fallen so far back.
:( I feel so bad for him~ Not so much because he's regressed like this, but because he's beating himself up over it.

He rubbed their noses together in an eskimo kiss. "And I'll always, always be here to help you back up if you fall, okay?"
Even in such a sad situation, this made me break out into a grin.

Noticing the small change, YoungSaeng realized what he must have done and pulled back to look him in the eyes. "I'm sorry...I love you so much, Kyu, but I don't...I'm so scared, and I don't know why," he tried to explain. "Please, don't be mad..." he pleaded, a few tears escaping.
Oh my god... this is making me tear up!

"Kyu, I don't wanna feel like this anymore..." he choked out, unable to think of anything else.
:'(

It was all worth it, though," he said suddenly, distracted by the way their hands fit together.
:D

Responding to the kiss, ( ... )

Re: This. Is. Not. Fair. I. Want. Hyunmin. Nao. renichifreak February 24 2011, 01:07:29 UTC

You led to the near bath Yeonnie's computer got when she saw the subject name~~

she nearly spit coke all over the screen from laughter~~

/applauds you

Re: This. Is. Not. Fair. I. Want. Hyunmin. Nao. yeonah February 24 2011, 01:08:59 UTC

You just made me nearly spray my laptop screen /coughing

(And I look into my inbox to see unnie already said that while I'm busy trying to clean up the mess LOLOL )

We've made a HyunMin shipper out of you~~~ LOLOL /not complaining at all~~~

Your comments are so cuuuuuute and I love them so much, and I agree with Carey when she says your comments are EASILY one of the best things of posting the chapters XDDDDD

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