Sanctuary - Chapter Three

[yeonah]

Title: Sanctuary
Chapter: 3/?
Authors: renichifreak and yeonah
Fandom: SS501
Pairings: KyuMin, HyunSaeng
Rating: PG-16
Warning:Angst, AU
Summary: In this era, people are bought and sold as though they are cattle. The human life is only worth what one is willing to pay for it. What happens when two such people end up in the possession of two brothers who

Comments

[hyunaepark]

and god.
LOL HORSE KICK.
KILLING ME.
BREATHELESS.
LOL
L OH FUCKING L.
<3 YES

[mochi_501x]

LOL OMG. the ending. Jungmin's sleeping habits always come up in your stories XD. He somehow attacks Kyujong everytime LOL. ^^;

I love how Saengie and Min are so cautious towards Kyu and Leader even though they haven't done anything to hurt them yet

and Baby being a brat LOL. (I also loved the part about Leader's ex bf. mixing flammable liquids XD)

can't wait for next update~

[renichifreak]

well with everything they've been through in the past, it's hard not to be cautious. Past owners may have acted nice to get their trust, but things always went badly, I'm sure

[ameliorate23]

*chuckling*

Well, it's official - I'm in love with this story.
I can't wait to see where it goes next.

All the relationships are interesting. I especially love Kyujong and Hyunjoong's.

I'm curious about Kyujong's ex. The one that's thankfully never mentioned.

Writing-wise: When they were having the conversation in the kitchen, I thought the parts where Kyujong would stare off and state a random observation about the slaves was a great effect. It made his disturbance with the whole scenario apparent and was a reaction I can relate with and is highly realistic. Hyunjoong also had a few moments like this.

Hyunjoong's pseudo-spaciness is also great, and, like noted, when he has those intense, focused, serious moments, it makes them all the more so.

[rawrstarrr]

SPOT FOR ME! <3

LOL.
I so love this story!
HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT PLEASE!