A World Without - Chapter Two

[yeonah]

Name: A World Without
Fandom: SS501 (appearances by Super Junior)
Pairings: KyuMin, 2HJ, 2YS, friendship!KyuSaeng, friendship!MinSaeng
Total Word Count: 33, 000
Chapters: 2/7 + Epilogue
Rating: PG-16
Warnings: Post-Apocalyptic themes, violence
Genre: Adventure, Romance, and a bit of Crack stirred in
Prompt: "A kiss is a lovely trick, designed by nature

Comments

[yeonah]

Spot for Cyn!!!!

[yeonah]

Spot for Carey~~~

[renichifreak]

The first day passed without consequence. Sure HyunJoong was sleeping through all of it, but they were used to their leader's sleeping habits by now and knew when he'd lain down after spelling the caravan that he'd be K.O.ed the rest of the way across the ruins. KyuJong on the other hand, had taken to poking the drow worriedly and wondering aloud if he was alive.

SO MUCH LOVE FOR THIS!!!

This whole thing is epic~!!!!

AND BAD ENDING PLACE~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

but I still love you~

[yeonah]

LOL I couldn't figure out where to end it! XD There wasn't a good spot!

<333333 /snuggles you forever

[yeonah]

Spot for Curione :3

[curionenene]

*takes spot* <3

lol did I send you the rest of what i betaed? Though... i don't think I changed much. lolol

[yeonah]

Spot for Kat <3

[mskatness]

-flails- This is torture, i need it alllll -whines- Why are you so good at this -clings-

[doomedpassion]

your writing switches from formal-ish to informal...making reading some sections of the story a little awkward, but the storyline is developing well.he'd be K.O.ed the rest

the other spots are less noticeable. I know it's easier to write K.O instead of knocked out, and this is writing is for fun only, but I wanted to make a comment so...yeah...I always like to make a comment for my favourite fanfic authors. Love ya! ;) keep up the good work

[doomedpassion]

next time could you give me a spot...it seems kind of awkward just commenting out of the blue, when you have all these spots for other readers...