PROMISE ME for BAEKLIGHTS

Aug 27, 2014 19:43

For: baeklights
Title: Promise Me
Pairing(s): Chanyeol/Chen, Chanyeol/Baekhyun
Rating: NC-17
Warning(s): angst, infidelity, smut
Length: 7,701
Summary: The only thing harder than Jongdae leaving is the moment when he returns.

I’ll protect him, Mama. Just don’t take him away. )

rating: nc-17, 2014, pairing: chen

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baeklights August 27 2014, 22:47:49 UTC
ahhh, SPOT.

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baeklights August 28 2014, 04:39:48 UTC
i attempted to wait a few hours to calm down so i could leave a semi-coherent comment, but...that's probably not going to happen.

ok, first of all, i was so !!! that you picked this prompt bc i felt like i was asking for a lot in the prompt, and you delivered and did such a good job with it. TYSM. ♥

like, ok, you started with kid!chenyeol, like just take my heart already. Chanyeol takes a shaky breath. “But I want to marry him now,” the C U T E. that whole first scene, i just. i knew there was gonna be angst, so i tried to steel myself but it was so cute. and when chanyeol couldn't fit the ring on any of jongdae's little fingers. T____T

Chanyeol still misses Jongdae, but it’s more like he regrets that they didn’t grow up together like they were supposed to. There’s a picture of them together, taken when they were kids (shortly before Jongdae left) that sits on Chanyeol’s dresser. He looks at it every morning, but there’s not much he remembers about Jongdae anymore. W H Y Y Y Y Y Y Y ( ... )

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baekhannies August 31 2014, 14:11:56 UTC
That was just so-- beautiful ; A ; omg that was really just so so amazing huhu I'm so happy that baekhyun could get over the fact that they couldn't be together like an adult and decided to leave intead of fighting reality and such HE thought about everything before making his decision. I'll be honest, I dont usually like baekhyun in fics but this one was really nice c': and jongdae ohhh mymyyy jONDAEER HOW CAN U BE SO SPECIAL AND CUTE AND SO NICE AKBDKSJCIDBJF CHANYEOL U FUCKING PIECE OF SHIT COME HER AND I'LL MAKE YOU FOOD FOR THE HORSES (poor horses) really chanyeol seems to change of romantic interests too quickly but i hope he'll be loyal to jonda bc jondaaaaa you're so special and you kept the promise, different from someone I know /side eyes the horses' food ( ... )

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bluedreaming September 7 2014, 22:03:38 UTC
I don't even know what to say (ㅠ_ㅠ) the beginning was so sad! But cute! But sad! And then Baekhyun! And I didn't know what to think because Jongdae! But Baekhyun! (And here's me trying to hope for a happy ever after for all of them). But then you worked it around to Jongdae again and ♡ it was the best thing ever and Baekhyun was okay! And sassy! And the world is right again. I hope everyone reads this because it can't be missed ♡ (and I love the AU!!!! Like modern princes orz amazing) I'm sorry for the trash comment orz please know I truly loved the story though (ㅠ_ㅠ)

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