On air for ambulanceu

Feb 01, 2017 21:22

For: ambulanceu
Title: On Air
Pairing(s): Chanyeol/Baekhyun
Rating: PG
Warning(s) Spoilers of K.Will’s ‘Please Don’t’ MV (sorry)
Length: 3.1k
Summary: DJ PCY’s biggest fan starts sending him unusual messages.
Author's note: Dear recipient, this is a short, little fic, but I hope you can enjoy it anyway. You asked for no OCs and, since I needed to mention a ( Read more... )

2016, rating: pg, pairing: baekhyun

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rosevic87 February 2 2017, 16:15:17 UTC
This was really cute and fluffy! I was a bit worry might be angst/sad but it really wasn't! Took Yeol a while to correlate his username and then the sender of the messages to be Baek though 😂

Thank you for writing!

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caterplina February 5 2017, 18:27:14 UTC
oh don't worry, i couldn't write a angsty fic for this
yeol is a little oblivious at times, but baekhyun could have been a bit more straightforward :P

thank you for reading and leaving a comment!

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canadaphile February 3 2017, 03:10:33 UTC
This was precious. DJ Park showing favouritism and his listeners knowing it. FINALLY REALISING THAT IT'S BAEKHYUN ALL ALONG. Took him long enough, but the parallelism of their feelings until Baekhyun's revealed was really great. Chanyeol wasn't blind or dumb; he was aware Feelings were happening but couldn't place what they were, exactly. Until later.

This could've gotten really heavy really fast, and I am so glad you didn't torture us like that. Just kept things rolling and slowly progressing through while Chanyeol pushes at the wall Baekhyun puts up.

Best part: Whatever he was planning on saying next gets cut off by Baekhyun’s mouth on his. It can’t be considered a kiss, not when neither of them can’t stop grinning.

“I lov-”

A kiss.

“Let me-”

Another kiss.

“Just-”

Another kiss.

Chanyeol falls back on the couch, with Baekhyun on top of him, dropping kisses all over his face. He laughs loudly and lets him do whatever he wants. He gives himself to Baekhyun. So many kisses. /w\ My favourite kisses are these really smiley ones, ( ... )

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caterplina February 5 2017, 18:28:59 UTC
hey!! i'm so happy you liked it ^^
i wanted to keep things light and fun. it's chanbaek, i can't write angst for them lol
and i love that type of kisses too. and the banter at the end lol

thank you so much for reading and leaving a comment!

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lotusk February 4 2017, 08:08:11 UTC
I am a real sucker for the best friends in love trope and when they're both oblivious and pining for each other it just makes the story that much more delicious.

I love how much chanyeol and baekhyun are a part of each other's lives and yet they fail at communicating their feelings for each other. Baek trying to tell Yeol thru the k.will MV and song request and the messages to the radio show and Yeol not getting it!! I just want to shake them and say - JUST TELL HIM HOW YOU FEEL.

But at the same time, that's what makes this story so beautiful? The push-pull of loving someone and wanting to tell them but also being crippled by the fear that things will get messed up if you do. It's so relatable and you developed this really well here /clutches chest/

I was so happy when they finally got their happy ending bc they really deserved one ;;;

Chanyeol knows smiles can be heard.

I hope you can feel the smile in my words when I tell you that I loved this A LOT! Thanks for sharing!

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caterplina February 5 2017, 18:29:56 UTC
awwwwww i love you!!!

and yes, smiles can be heard and smiles can be read too ^__^
thank you so much!!

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dreaminglasts February 5 2017, 20:22:24 UTC
This was so cute!!! I really enjoyed the slow build to Chanyeol's realization and then his confession. :)

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caterplina February 6 2017, 02:02:19 UTC
thanks :) i'm glad you enjoyed it!

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ambulanceu February 6 2017, 01:37:31 UTC
first of all, i'm really sorry for this late comment!! i read this when it was first posted but i haven't had the time to comment ah i'm so sorry ;-;

i was studying for an exam i was going to take and reading this in between breaks really helped to relieve some of the stress because it was so cute i really liked it!!

baekhyun being a low-key loyal listener and cy's no 1 fan tho!! and chanyeol playing favourites tho my heart felt a little pinch at that flashback to baekhyun and chanyeol's conversation because jealous and secretly pining best friend :""")

also chanbaek arguing over who confessed first at the end i can totally see that happening jfgbegbeirge i'm glad they got the happy ending they deserved :"") really thank you for this i really enjoyed reading it!!

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caterplina February 6 2017, 02:01:45 UTC
no worries about the late comment. i'm really happy that the fic helped you ^___^ i hope you did well on your exam. i know how stressful it can be :S

i'm glad you liked it. there were things that i didn't know if you'd like because i don't know your taste, though I've read a few of your fics.

but well, it's chanbaek hehehe they're a pair of cute, funny dorks. and i tried to keep that essence in the fic

<3

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