Bad weather, bad coffee for thechenesis
For: thechenesis
Title: Bad Weather, Bad Coffee
Pairing(s): Chanyeol/Chen
Rating: PG-13
Length: 2.5k
Summary: Chanyeol doesn’t have any luck with the weather, but he does have some with the cute barista where he performs on Saturdays.
Author’s note: I ,,, had such a struggle with this. There was a couple of times where everything went wrong-from my internet ( Read more... )
Title: Bad Weather, Bad Coffee
Pairing(s): Chanyeol/Chen
Rating: PG-13
Length: 2.5k
Summary: Chanyeol doesn’t have any luck with the weather, but he does have some with the cute barista where he performs on Saturdays.
Author’s note: I ,,, had such a struggle with this. There was a couple of times where everything went wrong-from my internet ( Read more... )
Comments 2
I DON'T HAVE WORDS
OMG OMG OMG
I don't know if I should react to it all or if I should start with my favorite parts or what I should do because this is so short but also so sweet and wonderful and perfect t_t (see, I ended up starting with an overall reaction) it got the perfect amount of sweetness and sass and romance. I absolutely ADORE when Jongdae is characterized like this -- confident and straightforward and sassy! Besides that, Jongdae with piercings was a joy to imagine (even more than a joy >3) and it fit so well with his overall style. I loved the dialogues, loved your flow, loved the little metaphor with the rain, and the ending was a cherry on top for me (I love happy endings)!
An extra sweetness was Junmyeon's cafe. It was only a detail but you thought of it so well and made it so wonderful that it really made imagining it a lot more fun!
As for my favorite parts, I didn't quote them as I read it TT but let me try to go back to some
"Chanyeol thinks he looks like a poodle ( ... )
Reply
Reply
Leave a comment