To touch a daydream for tintatalk

Jan 18, 2017 11:56

For: tintatalk
Title: To Touch a Daydream
Pairing(s): Chanyeol/Baekhyun, side!Chanyeol/Wendy
Rating: PG-15
Warning(s): themes of homophobia
Length: 27.5k
Summary: Baekhyun is many things. He's beautiful, but dangerous. Charming, but elusive. Baekhyun is always just out of Chanyeol's reach, but never out of his thoughts, even when Chanyeol forgets everything ( Read more... )

2016, rating: pg-15, pairing: baekhyun

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greeent January 19 2017, 16:51:57 UTC
oh my goodness i seriously love this story so much!!! this was so amazing. there are so many things i actually had prepared to tell you while i was reading but i'm on my phone and i couldn't go back and write everything that i wanted to OTL ( ... )

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winterdynasty February 7 2017, 05:27:21 UTC
Wow I’m >w< this is such a sweet comment, thank you so much. I’m glad that you liked my writing! And I’m glad you liked the story! And I had to give it a happy end - after all that suffering they were put through I figured it be rude to make them suffer more huhu Thank you so much for loving it ^^ (your English is lovely, dear <3)

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tintatalk January 20 2017, 06:33:16 UTC
okay, so, how do i even begin ( ... )

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winterdynasty February 7 2017, 05:33:52 UTC
Honestly, I’m so glad that you enjoyed it! I was just hoping it would be a fic that you’d like >n<
:D I’m really happy that you liked the way I wrote it; I tend to throw in tiny things in dialogue that make me laugh and just hope readers won’t roll their eyes at it lol but I’m glad you liked it!!

I’m also glad that you liked Chanyeol too!!! As I was writing him I fell for him too (as I… did in real life as well… /coughs) sweet baby tbh I felt bad for him as I was writing, like why was I doing this to him ; __ ; I just wanted to protect him ; __ ; The part when Chanyeol went off on Baekhyun was definitely my favorite to write sdkndksk Chanyeol deserved the world :’(

I don’t often write broken!baekyeol so I thought this was fairly challenging, but I’m just so happy that you liked it; it honestly means the world to me to know you enjoyed what I wrote <3

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thebakaberry January 20 2017, 13:59:31 UTC
My heart is literally b r o k e n this was such a ride of emotions and you conveyed them so vividly. This whole thing was just so beautifully written and I think that you really made the problem at hand so realistic by showing it from both sides. One thing I love love love like it was literally my favorite thing ever was how you just built up all these little signs to show that Chanyeol was still in love all those years and I'd just pass them off as something kinda mundane, like cute little details that add to the effect, BUT THAT SCENE WHERE CHANYEOL IS LIKE (sorry I can't quote I'm on mobile) I DONT KNOW IF IT MATTERS BUT WHEN I FIRST WOKE UP ALL I COULD REMEMBER WAS YOU (I think that's wrong but you get what part I'm talking about, right?) I WAS LITERALLY SCREAMING MY HEART WAS BEATING SO FAST THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS BEAUTY OF A FIC ILY <333

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winterdynasty February 7 2017, 05:39:29 UTC
Ah! I’m glad! I was afraid I’d make readers too upset with Baekhyun so I’m glad showing both sides made it better <3 THAT SCENE (I totally know what you're talking about) WAS TOTALLY ONE OF MY FAVORITES I’M SO HAPPY THAT YOU LIKED IT ; A ; <333

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lucifer_land January 20 2017, 14:19:09 UTC
This fic was beauriful. I've recently been debating with perspective and you mastered this one. The way you wrote this was very well done and the characterisation was just right too. You handled the memory loss well I feel, and a lot of other things too.
Well done, Ioved this ^^

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winterdynasty February 7 2017, 05:44:18 UTC
Thank you so much!! ^^ I’ve been messing around with my writing style recently so I’m glad it came out positive to you!

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owmichi January 20 2017, 17:40:17 UTC
IDEK KNOW WHERE TO BEGIN I HAVE TEARS FROM THE BEGINNING TO END...READING THIS FEELS LIKE A BLESSING TO ME BECAUSE THE FIC WAS SO BEAUTIFUL...THE WAY YOU CONCEIVED EVERYTHING, EVERY EMOTION, EVERY MOMENT GOSH IT WAS ALL BEAUTIFUL AND PERFECT :-( YOUR WAY OF WRITING AMAZES ME HOW ARE YOU SO GOOD OH MY GOD THIS WAS SO BRILLIANT IT HURTS...IDK MAN LIKE I FORGOT HOW TO FUNCTION AFTER READING THE WAVES OF EMOTIONS YOUR STORY GOT ME WERE HUGE BUT IT ALL FELT BEAUTIFUL...YOU MADE ME FELL IN LOVE WITH CHANBAEK ALL OVER AGAIN AND DAMN I JUST WANNA THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS AND SHARING IT WITH US AND ALSO FOR NOT GIVING UP ON THIS MONSTROUS FIC LIKE OH MY GOD 27K WORDS IS REALLY HUGE YOU REALLY ARE SOMETHING AUTHORNIM

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winterdynasty February 7 2017, 05:47:10 UTC
SNDKFNKDS IDK WHAT TO SAY TO THIS LOL I’M SORRY THERE WERE SO MANY TEARS???? I’m glad I made you feel so many emotions and I'm glad that you liked it lol 27k isn’t too long for me ;D Thank you Michiiii this was so sweet haha <3

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