Trust me and just jump for koizoras

[yeolliepopday]

For: koizoras
Title: Trust Me and Just Jump
Pairing(s): Chanyeol/Baekhyun
Rating: PG-13
Warning(s) Use of guns, nongraphic deaths of minor characters, excessive swearing
Length: 5k
Summary: Baekhyun is a trained mercenary, and one of the best. He does not, will not like some new member coming in to take all of the glory
Author's note: I hope you like this

Comments

[koizoras]

It was so funny how Chanyeol was long-winded and bumbling and never serious and it was that, combined with the inexplicable competence that frustrated Baekhyun. In fact Baekhyun's grumpy exterior in general was just the best, and the way Chanyeol shook his life up with little effort was gold. The competition was so one-sided it was almost sad, like Chanyeol was doing it to provoke Baekhyun and for kicks, while Baekhyun was still in denial and as a result the only one taking it seriously. It really showed how much Chanyeol affected him. I really loved that you had the characters interact mostly in the middle of action scenes, with the feelings just coming naturally along the ride. It was fun imagining the visual sequences as I read it, starring bamfs Baekyeol - Baek as the seasoned veteran and all round ace, Chanyeol as the reckless newbie with no fear for his life. The refuge in audacity, Gadfly-baiting and bantering, are all some of my favourite things. The flowers at the ending was great, too, how they just can't lose the

[greeent]

the sexual frustration is really high on this one hahahaha
“Because I checked. I wanted you to be watching me.” my favourite line!!!!!!

anyway wait the ending got me confused. was baekhyun just another "target" for chanyeol? or? @_@ i mean was he just playing around with baek? or was he just teasing baekhyun knowing that it will rile him up? haha

thank you for writing this story and participating in this fest!!! i wish you have a pleasant 2017!

[alitalitha]

Arrrh! It's so intriguing to read thank you so much!! I love their characters, it fits them really well! My most favorite part is when Baekhyun visited Chanyeol in the hospital hahaha it's cute that he can't stop himself from getting worried no matter how annoyed he was with him. And ofc the ending omg I laughed so hard hahaha I wish this was longer ;u; once again thank you for writing this! <3