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Title: Better Late Than Never (Just Don’t Make Me Wait Forever)
Pairing(s): Chanyeol/Baekhyun
Rating: PG-13
Warning(s) Sexual situations
Length: 12.2k
Summary: Chanyeol first met Baekhyun in high school. They weren’t friends. Fifteen long years later, they might’ve finally made a little progress.
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“Park Chanyeol?” The voice was familiar, and laced with disbelief. )
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Thank you so much for making my favorite movie into a chanbaek fanfiction, I couldn't have asked anything better.
/goes back to crying/
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i mean, he contacted baekhyun first when he got news about his mother? like dude isn't that the biggest hint everrrr you giant elf u_u
thank you so much for joining the fest! i was so happy when i saw how long the story was!!! sldhaka i love them long hahaha
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You managed to convey all your meaning in just the right way at just the right pace in few words, as per the style of the fic. Sometimes, timehopping can make a reader feel a little detatched but this felt seamless.
Your characterisation was perfect and it was just so well written!
You must be and English writer right? Even if you're not, I'm an English reader and I really felt at ease reading this because the way you've written the dialogue, the phrasing etc, is so familliar to me, I just understood all the emotions and meaning.
I also liked the 'realness' of this story. They lived their lives, they saw other people, their friendship really did feel true and as much as it's nice to read fanciful romance, your portrayal of both in this was how things can actually be in real life as opposed to just a romance novel.
Anyway, thank you for writing this :)
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