Beautiful beautiful beautiful. Theplot is nice, the characters are stable and entertaining. The pace is good and steady. The story..my..the story is beautiful!!!!! I loooooove it. The teenage sehan are great, not too much and just proportioned right. Baekhyun is love though lol. And the chansoo is just peeeerfect.
I ~LOVED IT~ omg so so so much, thank you! ;; you made it perfectly and i loved your characters and i loved the story and how you ported the plot! the innuendos tho!! omg ;; I really loved your selu twins and baekhyun was p e r f e c t! loved when he sang call me maybe ;; i loved this, this is wonderful! thank you for your hard work! i don't really know what to say kjfsdadf i might just quote the whole fic every part was a fave. thank you a lot it was perfect!
hI!!! i'M REALLY GLAD YOU LIKED IT ;________; i REALLY THought I failed bc i really did have a tough time writing this lol my temporary beta at the time kept asking me if it was because it was chansoo and i was being a butt, telling her no lol but I ended up finishing anyways, whew. Im sorry, i would've added NC17 but i didn't know how to transition into that ;________________; because im lame and it was hitting the mood and I didn't wanna force it T.T So i just made really stupid gross adult jokes lol .
thank you for the great prompts (like really, i switched to this prompt at the very last minute), i wish I could've done the other ones too but # tired from this 25k OTL. (also sorry for the formatting mistakes on this fic, i didn't realize I accidentally messed it up when i was finalizing stuff before turning it into a .txt)
but anyways, thanks again ;; // had fun writing this even tho i was dying half the time haha
Whoaa it's purfect. Many writers I know have great skill in describing in narrative, but your style bringing different caliber of describing via dialogue. Your arrangements on dialogue made are these characters so intriguing. I really enjoy this story tho. I know maybe you are comfortable in writing chanbaek or baeksoo. But to me this story it’s so refreshing, blessed the cute prompt XD and tbh I more enjoy read this version (even I’m a chanbaek trash
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Hey, b! Thanks so much for this comment ;____; its rlly nice of you considering its poop, im poop, everything's poop as fffff--- but thank you. Thank you x 100000 times.
Someone actually told me that the kids don't act their age, like they're younger than they actually are but tch, i dont know kids haha
ps: yeah theres a hidden meaning, like, like adult meaning :-------------------------) ps2: FUUUUUU SHHH stfu about that single daddy baekhyun daughter thing, okay like, im keeping that to myself shhh
Oh my god thank you so much for this! I really really loved it! Ughhh i just wish they don't need to wait that longggg like pls chansoo we all know both of you are all over each other. All the characters are A+ especially the twins omg they were so mature more so than their dumb!dad.
it felt funny having chankaisoo interact and placed as they were in the restaurant (bc kaisoo is my top g otp yknw) but anyhoo, i was at the edge of my seat waiting for chanyeol to ask kyungsoo out, so how things eventually turned out was great, amazing, 10/10. i was also waiting for kyungsoo to realise that chanyeol was his mystery date hahahaha, glad you mentioned it. also Lu, Se and Baekkie are the best kiddy exo that i've ever encountered.
loved your writing throughout. many thanks for sharing \(*o*)/~~
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And the chansoo is just peeeerfect.
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I ~LOVED IT~ omg so so so much, thank you! ;; you made it perfectly and i loved your characters and i loved the story and how you ported the plot! the innuendos tho!! omg ;; I really loved your selu twins and baekhyun was p e r f e c t! loved when he sang call me maybe ;; i loved this, this is wonderful! thank you for your hard work! i don't really know what to say kjfsdadf i might just quote the whole fic every part was a fave. thank you a lot it was perfect!
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thank you for the great prompts (like really, i switched to this prompt at the very last minute), i wish I could've done the other ones too but # tired from this 25k OTL. (also sorry for the formatting mistakes on this fic, i didn't realize I accidentally messed it up when i was finalizing stuff before turning it into a .txt)
but anyways, thanks again ;; // had fun writing this even tho i was dying half the time haha
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Someone actually told me that the kids don't act their age, like they're younger than they actually are but tch, i dont know kids haha
ps: yeah theres a hidden meaning, like, like adult meaning :-------------------------)
ps2: FUUUUUU SHHH stfu about that single daddy baekhyun daughter thing, okay like, im keeping that to myself shhh
and okay haha see you around, b
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Good job in writing this dear author! ❤️❤️❤️❤️
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it felt funny having chankaisoo interact and placed as they were in the restaurant (bc kaisoo is my top g otp yknw) but anyhoo, i was at the edge of my seat waiting for chanyeol to ask kyungsoo out, so how things eventually turned out was great, amazing, 10/10. i was also waiting for kyungsoo to realise that chanyeol was his mystery date hahahaha, glad you mentioned it. also Lu, Se and Baekkie are the best kiddy exo that i've ever encountered.
loved your writing throughout. many thanks for sharing \(*o*)/~~
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