Sanctions of imprudence for yuraxchan

Jul 27, 2015 20:12

For: yuraxchan
Title: Sanctions of Imprudence
Pairing(s): Chanyeol/Chen, Chanyeol/Kai
Rating: R for various muted mature situations
Warning(s): Drug abuse, biblical references, sharp plot turn, character death.
Length: 7.4k
Summary: Growing up with Jongin, Chanyeol never thought he would turn this naughty, but everything changes when he reunites with old- ( Read more... )

2015, rating: r, pairing: chen, pairing: kai

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yuraxchan July 28 2015, 11:06:09 UTC
First of all, thank you very much for writing this for me ♥

YOU WROTE ME KAIYEOL ;-; my babies <3
(i also love ChanChen btw)

Jongin doesn’t say anything, but he watches as Chanyeol falls asleep, and ends up sleeping on the floor with his head on Chanyeol’s bed.
Nini is so kind, and cute, and lovable! They're so cute at the beginning together, although i could see Chanyeol and Jongin were kinda different. I mean, Jongin was a real sweetheart but Chanyeol looks more adventurous, curious even and i knew he would be easily swayed by Jongdae. It's a shame ;;

Jongdae is bad news, and Jongin had known it from the start ;-; this is so sad though...Because he loved Chanyeol, took care of him and tried to protect him (from Jongdae and himself) but Chanyeol didn't listen and let Jongdae took him away from Jongin. HOW COULD YOU PCY. And when i thought he would finally see the light, it was already too late...

AND YOU KILLED MY PRECIOUS JONGIN. i might resent you for that dear author orzThe end surprised me, i didn't think Jongin would die ( ... )

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onnaonah August 8 2015, 02:58:13 UTC
I'm very glad you liked it!!

Just a glimpse of the story's universe: Humans are humans, but there are devil and angel families living among us--partly because of the "there's always an angel/devil within us" narrative. However, since I grew up knowing that angels are metaphysical and have no privilege of free will, I made Jongin a Good Deed, which is kind, can think for themselves, and has a glowing physical appearance! Like Jongin! Jongdae and his mother, on the other hand, are straight up devils. They just are. They are eloquent, appealing, and they have this extreme charisma to lure people in.

And and and I made Alice in Wonderland references, in case you haven't noticed u_u Mostly Cheshire Cat, Mad Hatter, and Queen of Hearts, if you can guess where they are ;)

Once again, thank you for reading through, and commenting, and loving <3 I definitely enjoyed my time writing this story.

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yuraxchan August 10 2015, 20:31:07 UTC
Thank you for the explanation :)

I'm sorry but i don't really know/like Alice in Wonderland so i didn't pick up the references ^^;;

Thank you again for writing this story for me n.n

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theshadowsdance August 2 2015, 18:47:38 UTC
wow
this is such an interesting story

i legit thought jongin was an angel because Good Deed, and he died/disappeared but jongdae says he's not really an angel so maybe it's only metaphorical? or he's kinda like jongdae, half-human

there's this strange-but-good feeling about this story, like at jongdae's house, when chanyeol talked to jongdae's mother it feels bright but also eerie to me. i like it

despite everything that happened, i still think chanyeol is lucky (and unlucky) to be close with both jongin and jongdae lmao

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onnaonah August 8 2015, 02:59:30 UTC
Thank you for reading and liking and peering deeper for insights!! I definitely appreciate it!!! <3

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