The world is falling in love for darkhorse1397

Jul 22, 2015 22:20

For: darkhorse1397
Title: The World Is Falling In Love
Pairing(s): Chanyeol/Kai
Rating: G
Length: 6.6k
Summary: Actor Park Chanyeol had everything he needed for his life to be a perfect romantic comedy. Except the co-star he has in mind isn't quite following his script.
Author's note: Hello prompter! I may... have taken your prompt a little too literally, but ( Read more... )

2015, rating: g, pairing: kai

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moon_things July 23 2015, 06:19:17 UTC
ಥ______ಥ this is so cute pls.....
the passage of time is so natural and i love the parallels btwn the script and real life ♡
and the ENDIng w the callback to the very beginning i'm. i'm tearing up tbh *___* ♡♡♡

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darkhorse1397 July 23 2015, 15:15:34 UTC
asdfghjkl!!!!!! *throws myself into the sun as what did I do to deserve this plays in the background* Firstly, this is absolutely amazing and I loved ever aspect of it. Oh gosh, where do I begin to say all the things I loved about this.
Okay, So my absolute favorite things about the story ( I couldn't just pick one): The fact that everything is so natural and that Jongin isn't willing to throw himself into a relationship. It's so very natural and flows easily! The next is how the script and Chanyeol's life mirror each other. It was a wonderful use of parallelism. And TAo... My lord... PA Tao...That was great! This is such a wonderful fic and it goes above and beyond (way BEYOND) my expectations! I loved everything about it. I just can't shove all the love into a small review box (LOL). This was so perfect and I thank you for a wonderful gift, my friend!

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fixedstar0328 July 24 2015, 17:42:25 UTC
Jongin snorted. “If you want it to taste like poison we have some instant powder.”
lol that interview when jongin said coffee tastes like poison he's so precious

this was beautiful! ❤️❤️❤️

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lolly1588 July 28 2015, 18:27:45 UTC
this is so deep ,i wish there was more to it
but the flow was perfect ,both character was well written to fit

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maddymoonchild August 9 2015, 08:24:46 UTC
Uggggguuuuuuuu this was so so precious =w=
I love Yeol's obsession with finding the one and the lack of sympathy from everyone
Yay Dance of the Sugar Plum Fairy!
I liked the inclusion of Jongin thinking coffee is poison lol
Overall, I really loved the progression and the sweetness of the story. Super great!

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