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darkhorse1397 Title: The World Is Falling In Love
Pairing(s): Chanyeol/Kai
Rating: G
Length: 6.6k
Summary: Actor Park Chanyeol had everything he needed for his life to be a perfect romantic comedy. Except the co-star he has in mind isn't quite following his script.
Author's note: Hello prompter! I may... have taken your prompt a little too literally, but
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the passage of time is so natural and i love the parallels btwn the script and real life ♡
and the ENDIng w the callback to the very beginning i'm. i'm tearing up tbh *___* ♡♡♡
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Okay, So my absolute favorite things about the story ( I couldn't just pick one): The fact that everything is so natural and that Jongin isn't willing to throw himself into a relationship. It's so very natural and flows easily! The next is how the script and Chanyeol's life mirror each other. It was a wonderful use of parallelism. And TAo... My lord... PA Tao...That was great! This is such a wonderful fic and it goes above and beyond (way BEYOND) my expectations! I loved everything about it. I just can't shove all the love into a small review box (LOL). This was so perfect and I thank you for a wonderful gift, my friend!
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lol that interview when jongin said coffee tastes like poison he's so precious
this was beautiful! ❤️❤️❤️
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but the flow was perfect ,both character was well written to fit
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I love Yeol's obsession with finding the one and the lack of sympathy from everyone
Yay Dance of the Sugar Plum Fairy!
I liked the inclusion of Jongin thinking coffee is poison lol
Overall, I really loved the progression and the sweetness of the story. Super great!
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