Okay. How do I start? I read this earlier and it took me this long to actually calm down and sit so I could come up with a decent comment. I'm terrible at commenting and I could just say this was written beautifully but this deserves a long comment. So here I go.
This was beyond what I expected. The prompt was my favorite because I have a thing for actor!chanyeol and I'm so, so happy that you chose to write this. And I'm also super happy about the pairing(s); chanhun is one of my top OTPs, Kyungsoo/Minah look good in my head and xiuchen is just amazing. Your characterization is A+ as well. The way you characterized Chanyeol is exactly how I wanted him to be, maybe even more. Also, making Sehun a blond surfer boy with a six pack underneath that shirt and one who smiles and laughs and is kind to everyone except Chanyeol is just - double, triple A+++. Basically, the whole crew is just amazing. Jongin is amazing.I'm an emotional reader, so even when something I read contains only happiness, I would still shed a tear or two. This fic was
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OMG I loved it. The characterization was so great. I often read easilyfriendly!chanyeol fic, so your awkward!chanyeol was a fun change. Friendly!sehun was great as well. The friendship between kyungsoo and chanyeal was also A+. So great.
I know I liked a story when I'm sad it ends, cause I just want MORE and oh boy did just fic make me want MORE!!! Thanks for writing it~
Okay I'm commenting from my phone so I can't quote all the stuff I'd like to, but from the first scene and then consistently throughout the humor in this is perfect ♡ witty, charming, sassy, but still ultimately well rounded and believable characters. I especially appreciate the fact that, like Jongin said, Chanyeol isn't completely an asshole, he's just....a cactus, lol
All of the fun pairs in this too!! Joonmyun and Sunyoung, oh my heart ♡♡ and I love how Kris is hardly ever onscreen, but still manages to be this larger than life diva xD the xiuchen was gold ♡ Kyungsoo and Minahhhhh
Pacing was also great, I couldn't put it down but it felt fully developed. I wasn't expecting the ending, but it was a nice one ♡ thank you so much for writing this, I haven't had so much pure fun reading a fic in ages! ( do I know you? >.> )
Its perfect. Omg i dont know how to explain it. How you developed their relationship is perfect. Both of them compromised and gv chance to each other. I love how you made no one to be the bad or the best. Love that you made chanyeol cold on the outside yet very warm inside, i know ppl who are like that and its very sad that they are mostly got judged badly. Ypu wrote everything All in perfect balance and perfect pace. Just, perfect.
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This was beyond what I expected. The prompt was my favorite because I have a thing for actor!chanyeol and I'm so, so happy that you chose to write this. And I'm also super happy about the pairing(s); chanhun is one of my top OTPs, Kyungsoo/Minah look good in my head and xiuchen is just amazing. Your characterization is A+ as well. The way you characterized Chanyeol is exactly how I wanted him to be, maybe even more. Also, making Sehun a blond surfer boy with a six pack underneath that shirt and one who smiles and laughs and is kind to everyone except Chanyeol is just - double, triple A+++. Basically, the whole crew is just amazing. Jongin is amazing.I'm an emotional reader, so even when something I read contains only happiness, I would still shed a tear or two. This fic was ( ... )
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I know I liked a story when I'm sad it ends, cause I just want MORE and oh boy did just fic make me want MORE!!! Thanks for writing it~
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All of the fun pairs in this too!! Joonmyun and Sunyoung, oh my heart ♡♡ and I love how Kris is hardly ever onscreen, but still manages to be this larger than life diva xD the xiuchen was gold ♡ Kyungsoo and Minahhhhh
Pacing was also great, I couldn't put it down but it felt fully developed. I wasn't expecting the ending, but it was a nice one ♡ thank you so much for writing this, I haven't had so much pure fun reading a fic in ages! ( do I know you? >.> )
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Omg i dont know how to explain it.
How you developed their relationship is perfect. Both of them compromised and gv chance to each other. I love how you made no one to be the bad or the best. Love that you made chanyeol cold on the outside yet very warm inside, i know ppl who are like that and its very sad that they are mostly got judged badly. Ypu wrote everything All in perfect balance and perfect pace.
Just, perfect.
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