First time is on me (Second time is on you) for endlesstars

Sep 05, 2014 02:28

For: endlesstars
Title: First time is on me (Second time is on you)
Pairing(s): Chanyeol/Kai
Rating: PG-13
Warning(s): mentions of alcoholism, brief sexual situations at the end
Length: 3169w
Summary: Chanyeol is a divorce attorney who unexpectedly falls for his client’s soon-to-be ex-husband.
Author's note (optional): a big thanks to taopings for holding my hand and ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, 2014, pairing: kai

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endlesstars September 6 2014, 03:51:38 UTC
oawijefoijaf crying because I had to wait till after work to read and it was killing me all day, but it was a perfect thing to come home to omg so happy rn ♥ Chankai are so adorable (sobs at Jongin's attempts to get together with Chanyeol & eagerly replying when Chanyeol finally reaches out to him) and Sehunnnn I've been having many Sehun feelings lately so I'm happy he's in here and that he wanted Chanyeol to take care of Jongin awwwww ;~~; And you even wrote Siwon's ratstache /omg/ bless you I hated that thing!!

"Well if it is wooing you want, it is wooing you will get. I will woo you till hell and back Chanyeol, and you will love it."I MELLLLLLTED ;~~~~~; That's frickin sweet ( ... )

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mikinishimura September 9 2014, 01:28:24 UTC
I FINALLY AM REPLYING!!!! like 2 days later!! Whoops. YOU WILL HAVE EVEN MORE SEHUN FEELINGS IN THE SIDE STORY MWAHAHA IM GOING TO BREAK YOU INTO PIECES

Siwon as a put together lawyer with the exception of his ratstache and the constipation over eating too many burritos at donghaes taco bar hell yeah

YES LET US BE CLEAN PEOPLE TOGETHER UvU

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lizzyu September 6 2014, 08:01:29 UTC
oh no ): i ended up feeling so bad for sehun
the take care of him for me really affected me a lot ):

i was cringing through half the fic too because of jongin's habit, and how gross chanyeol must find them
but since they're still together, and chanyeol has the ability to accept jongin thinking about his ex every now and then, it must be true love

i really like the way you date jongin and chanyeol's meetings since it gives me a better idea of how long it takes for them to start dating each other (although im a bit iffy on them starting a relationship before the divorce is over, but whatever floats their boat)

thank you for writing this! ♥

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mikinishimura September 9 2014, 01:11:29 UTC
I'M SO SORRY THIS WASN'T MY INTENTION /hands you a tissue and pats your shoulder ( ... )

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vvipforseungri September 8 2014, 04:56:07 UTC
Hi hold on

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vvipforseungri September 8 2014, 05:14:10 UTC
I'M NOT OBLIGATED TO SAY THIS BUT AWWWW AT YOUR PCY I JUST LIKE HE IS SO DISGUESTED BUT EVEN SO

AND JONGIN BEING PERSISTENT AND SEHUN BEING SAD UGH THESE DYNAMICS.

BUT CHANYEOLS DISGUST WAS THE BEST LMAO

YOU DON'T GIVE YOURSELF ENOUGH CREDIT

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mikinishimura September 9 2014, 00:54:52 UTC
/CHOKES VI WHYYY

I just really dislike people without proper sanitary habits *insert sehun's bitchy face here* whispers peasants bUT I HAVE NEVER BEEN IN A CLUB SO?? /curses my young age/ Idk if they are really like this I guess it depends on which one you go to

YOU WILL UNDERSTAND WHY SEHUN IS SAD when I re-write this and do a spin off!!!.. I had to cut a lot of back story out in order to finish on time. Oh well that will be addressed later lmao.

Chanyeol's disgust is mine. I am Chanyeol. We are one.

DONT TRY TO FLATTER ME MY FIC WAS MEDIOCRE AT BEST sobs rewrite /conjures up the crossroads demon and sacrifices soul for writing ablilites

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zephyr2008 September 13 2014, 02:01:50 UTC
Well, technically, Chanyeol made a move first in the club. Everything he did was next to obvious, why did he ask Jongin whether they were dating? lol
I found that Chanyeol's confused why he dated Jongin was very cute. That meant Jongin was very special for him, right? XD
When Sehun whispered to Chanyeol, I was like 'shitttttttt!!!'. I'm sorry for him, actually. He's not a bad person.
Thank gods, you kinda sorta love happy ending. I always crave for Chankai fictions. That's why. lol
Thanks!

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CHANKAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIII!!! zaraaki July 22 2015, 01:37:02 UTC
chanyeol as oblivious as ever~!!!!!

hate broken sekai (1st OTP) but i love chankai (3rd???) as well so what the heck!!

jongin.....u're just too fast for the slowpoke chanyeol ahahhahaha....

oh sehunnnieeee~~ dont worry that slowpoke will take care of him welll~~~~

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