I have just barely gotten through the first part and I have to sleep because work looms omg but I am enjoying it so much and will be back as soon as possible to leave more love~ <3<3<3
and New Guy looks at him (down at him; he's too tall, like he's 90% limbs and 10% everything else) <- hee!
Scaredule, omg.
He gets strangely attached to props that need to be disposed, claiming that they have already carved a fond memory in his heart. <- I feel you, Jongdae, I feel you.
he's actually a cute lil' pug on the inside. <- If you could have heard my cackles omg.
"Possibly the best decision I've ever made." <- Anticipates all the ways this could be true *____*
Omg, poor Jongin. >.< I imagine with that bunch that he and Tao would really get a lot of it. >.>
Chanyeol has his arms on either side of Kyungsoo, and Kyungsoo exhales through the tiny opening of his mouth - slow, gradual, like he's savoring every last breath he has and counting down until Chanyeol pulls away and stands from where he is. <- Oh *___
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Chanyeol has that toothy grin on his lips, the one that makes him look half-puppy and half-legs. Oof;;;;
With Joonmyun, it started as idol worship that eventually turned into Kyungsoo assuming the responsibility of making sure Joonmyun took his vitamins. <- I love them so much ahahaha.
"Myself," he answers. The siren sounds off. "And anyone who can make me smile." <- ;~~; Awww that whole conversation. ;;;
Cooking. >.< Oh I have a weakness for domestic scenes like this.
"Definitely not my mom," Chanyeol replies, laughing a little. He ruffles Kyungsoo's hair and continues, "Too tiny. Less grumpy, but definitely cuter." <- Haa~
Chanyeol hits the brakes when they reach a red light, then turns the radio down just a little. Kyungsoo opens one eye, peeking at Chanyeol. "I love crazy." <- memories~~ that was such a cute scene in roommate
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Umumum hello o/ First off, thank you so much for the wonderful prompts! They're really lovely. :) Second, aaah I'm glad the you enjoyed the fic! Chanyeol's such a loveable character and I'm really relieved that sort of... showed in the fic. Haha.
and then the almost, almost, almost. Fyeah UST? Haha ;~~;
Wow. I don't ship chansoo (well, I didn't before, at least) but this was... wonderful. Amazing. The characterisation was so great, as was the dialogue, and you get inside the character's heads and verbalise their emotions and fears and hopes so perfectly. I fell in love with both kyungsoo and chanyeol, but especially chanyeol. I love how you make him and kyungsoo work for that love, and subsequently the reader - that whole 'slowly and then all at once' thing that John Green talks about. And chanyeol calling kyungsoo a gummy bear just about killed me.
I can always tell a fic is great when it makes me really ship a ship I'd have never dared to ship before - congrats, you have more than succeeded. On a final note, 'Suspension' is possibly my favourite Mae song (apart from 'Anything', perhaps), and I know whenever I listen to it I'll be thinking of this fic and how it made me feel. Thank you so much for writing this <3
Oh wow. I'm... speechless o___o This is such a moving comment, I swear. I'm really, really glad the characterization worked for you! Chanyeol isn't a character I write often so it's such a relief to hear from you that you... fell in love with him here. :) AND YES THE GUMMY BEAR PART there was a bit of a debate in my mind because I was trying to figure out how Kyungsoo would react to that, but Chanyeol just... made it work. Haha!
Aaah, good music ♥ It's always nice to find someone who shares love for the same artist. :) Thank YOU so much for reading! This really means a lot :)
I can't express with words how much I love this. I love how you build the tension between Chanyeol and Kyungsoo, the tension's seeping through my bones and I can't breathe while reading (that's a good thing, right?). I also love how you describe fear, man, I can feel it, chansoo's fears and also jongdae's. It hurts so good.
I dunno what I'd do if you ended it sad I'm glad you didn't. Thanks for this. :)
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Scaredule, omg.
He gets strangely attached to props that need to be disposed, claiming that they have already carved a fond memory in his heart. <- I feel you, Jongdae, I feel you.
he's actually a cute lil' pug on the inside. <- If you could have heard my cackles omg.
"Possibly the best decision I've ever made." <- Anticipates all the ways this could be true *____*
Omg, poor Jongin. >.< I imagine with that bunch that he and Tao would really get a lot of it. >.>
Chanyeol has his arms on either side of Kyungsoo, and Kyungsoo exhales through the tiny opening of his mouth - slow, gradual, like he's savoring every last breath he has and counting down until Chanyeol pulls away and stands from where he is. <- Oh *___ ( ... )
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With Joonmyun, it started as idol worship that eventually turned into Kyungsoo assuming the responsibility of making sure Joonmyun took his vitamins. <- I love them so much ahahaha.
"Myself," he answers. The siren sounds off. "And anyone who can make me smile." <- ;~~; Awww that whole conversation. ;;;
Cooking. >.< Oh I have a weakness for domestic scenes like this.
"Definitely not my mom," Chanyeol replies, laughing a little. He ruffles Kyungsoo's hair and continues, "Too tiny. Less grumpy, but definitely cuter." <- Haa~
Chanyeol hits the brakes when they reach a red light, then turns the radio down just a little. Kyungsoo opens one eye, peeking at Chanyeol. "I love crazy." <- memories~~ that was such a cute scene in roommate ( ... )
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and then the almost, almost, almost.
Fyeah UST? Haha ;~~;
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I can always tell a fic is great when it makes me really ship a ship I'd have never dared to ship before - congrats, you have more than succeeded. On a final note, 'Suspension' is possibly my favourite Mae song (apart from 'Anything', perhaps), and I know whenever I listen to it I'll be thinking of this fic and how it made me feel. Thank you so much for writing this <3
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Aaah, good music ♥ It's always nice to find someone who shares love for the same artist. :) Thank YOU so much for reading! This really means a lot :)
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I dunno what I'd do if you ended it sad I'm glad you didn't. Thanks for this. :)
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Thank you so much! Really glad you enjoyed this :D
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thrusts a basket of candy in your hand and a flower crown
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