REPRISALS, UNSPOKEN for XIYINGS
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Title: Reprisals, unspoken
Pairing(s): Chanyeol/Lay
Rating: PG-13
Warning(s): genderswitch, minor character death
Length: 3501w
Summary: Chanyeol doesn’t think anyone understands whatever that is going on.
Author's note: lots of hugs to the amazing beta for correcting mistakes i made in the initial draft, you’ve probably made reading this ( Read more... )
Title: Reprisals, unspoken
Pairing(s): Chanyeol/Lay
Rating: PG-13
Warning(s): genderswitch, minor character death
Length: 3501w
Summary: Chanyeol doesn’t think anyone understands whatever that is going on.
Author's note: lots of hugs to the amazing beta for correcting mistakes i made in the initial draft, you’ve probably made reading this ( Read more... )
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first of all, thank you so much for this!
this wasn't what i expected at all, but it took my expectations and blew them out of the water. you took my prompt and made it into something that i never imagined it could be. this is raw, gorgeous stuff. your prose is beautiful! this reads like a long prose poetry piece to me because of all the beautiful descriptions.
chanyeol imagines this. they go, they are released breaths that is how they taught themselves to fake glory; eyes bright, hands steady, with steel-toed bravado, and -
this is how he imagines they (or perhaps only himself) end and begin. noir-like, giggling, gasping.
this bit in particular moved me. it's the way they were brought up, isn't it? or maybe i just don't completely understand ( ... )
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(tbh i didn't know what i was writing so it's okay to not completely understand u_u)
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