Turtles

[yeolcarp]

Title: Turtles
Rating: R
Pairing/Focus: Yeoljong
Words: 3000+
Genre: Romance, N/A
Summary: Sungjong and Sungyeol are people who've known each other their whole lives, but they just don't seem to mix, and Sungjong knows this. However, Sungyeol feels entitled to be considered his childhood friend, making things more awkward as he suffocates the younger

Comments

[gyueffect]

OH GURL, I CRINGED

[yeolcarp]

GOOOOOOOD GOOOOOOOD
YOLOLOLOLOLOL

[kazu_kumaguro]

I really don't get the ending.
So Sungjong just feels bad for Sungyeol and accepts his existence (by having sex)?

[yeolcarp]

It's kind of an open ending where Sungjong still doesn't really understand his feelings. Has his feelings awoken for the boy or does he feel like he can't keep evading Sungyeol and just gives in? It's not really he accepts it by having sex but like he accepts it as a person. Haha I can't really explain my own story orz

[irethsingollo]

Ooh I'm loving this fic so so much (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*♥:･ﾟ✧

The beginning totally dragged me in, Sungjong contemplating about everything so much <33

And their relationship with Sungyeol, somehow it felt exactly the way they are, the distancing Sungjong and cheerful Yeol that tries to be as close as possible. You know, I always noticed how it's Yeol who does all the fanservice :3

I do like pretty girls,” Sungyeol beamed at his mother, “but Sungjong is prettier!” :D Reminded me of the moment Sunggyu said that whatever girl group would come, Sungjong would probably be prettier. Pure truth x"D

But oh god the smut ಠ◡ಠ So good, I loved the tension that was bulding in between them. You had me reduced to a puddle of goo by the end of it ಥ⌣ಥ

I love you for writing such smexy YeolJong, there's never enough of those too ♥
Hope you don't mind me adding you ~ I'm looking forward to read more from you, love your writing style *A*

[yeolcarp]

Woo, hello fellow yeoljong shipper ヽ( °ヮo)ノ
Thanks for the lovely comment, I was feeling iffy about this fic haha xD and much appreciated about the smut part, first time writing yaoi seriously

Yes, I would love to be friends (屮ಥДಥ)屮 I've been silently reading your yeoljong fics u___u

[irethsingollo]

Yay so nice to meet other shippers n_n
No problem at all, I really loved it ~ and I would have never guessed it was your first time writing smut, it was great :')

Adfjslkfdj aww so there's still someone reading my fics apart from the very few ppl that comment them? ;~; Such a nice feeling x"D Hope you like them ;3;

[yeolcarp]

lol usually I stick to hetero smut writing O3O

I should start leaving comments on your yeoljong fics, but I felt kind of shy haha ^^" I quite enjoy your writing yes I do \o/ especially how you characterize them

[engraved_16]

OH GOD

[yeolcarp]

lol yeah I'm an impatient person, I was actually really wanting to get to the smut writing so I was like "fuck it" but yea I know what you mean, my transitioning could have been better O3O

Oh gosh, your long comments are like candy for my eyes, when I see the length I'm so happy lol xD

Woop woop, the turtle passage is actually inspired from my own pet turtles, they're both alive tho so it's all good :)

[ext_2725316]

This is too good and I want to know what happens next. It would do well with a sequel! I totally find Sungjong very fascinating here.