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yenneffer

Signs of Never (1/?)

Jan 28, 2009 14:03

So, yeah, my first RPS. Ever.

Title: Signs of Never (1/?)
Fandom: Real Person Fiction (though for obvious reasons connected to SW)
Rating: PG-13 for this chapter for a little bit of swearing (will be more- hopefully *smirks*)
Characters: Hayden Christensen, Ewan McGregor, Eve, Clara, Esther, mentions of Jude Law
Pairings: Ewan/Eve, Hayden/Ewan, ( Read more... )

ewan mcgregor, rps, real person fiction, slash, hayden christensen

Comments 8

lucasluvs January 29 2009, 00:18:35 UTC

*shakes head*
Ewan you're hopeless!
This is a great start and i can't wait to see where you go ith it :D

yenneffer January 29 2009, 08:46:15 UTC

Oh yes. He is. You know, I'll just go tell him this and...
*cuts out the next three chapters* ...we can already go for the happy bit with sex.

Or maybe not- my muse would be angry with me.

And thank you for your nice comment-if it wasn't for this blasted exam today, I'd probably be already writing.

sandystarr88 January 29 2009, 06:25:04 UTC

Frowning in confusion, he started for the door, thinking furiously. He wasn’t even attracted to Ewan.

They were mates. As in blokes. Men.

He wasn’t really attracted to men in the first place.

*snorts*

Oh, Hayden you're really not going to win this one.

This fic looks really interesting, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)

yenneffer January 29 2009, 08:51:57 UTC

Of course he's not- I mean, I planned on the outcome of this arguement before he even started it. Maybe I should cut the poor man's misery short and tell him what he'll decide?

Hm, or maybe not... *laughs evilly*

Thanks for commenting, and the next chapter should be up soon- I want to cuddle it a little bit more, look for mistakes, torment either Hayden or Ewan (or both)... and then I'll post it.

So, yeah- this weekend, probably.

pronker January 29 2009, 07:17:07 UTC

Nice start and welcome. I like any story with whales mentioned in it.

yenneffer January 29 2009, 08:55:38 UTC

Welcome! So, I didn't start with dark Obi-wan, as you see, but it still swims in my head (I just hope he won't project himself in here too much).

And, hm, whales... It's my own private obsession. I really don't know how they ended up in this fic- they just sidestepped my guard and got into it.
But I'm glad you liked it :)

thesnowtraveler January 31 2009, 20:09:55 UTC

Nice beginning ^^

I like the French touch in it too =D

There is a small mistake though. "fille" means daughter. Do you want Eve to say "my son" or "my husband" ? "Mon fils" = "my son". "Mon mari" = "my husband" =)

Also, it's better if you write "désolée" instead of "desolee".

yenneffer January 31 2009, 20:23:37 UTC

*blushes*
Omg... I honestly have no idea how this could happen... I really was thinking about husband, and sure, I'm not French, but I... Well, there honestly is no excuse. I'll improve it right away. And thanks :)

And, the second thing... I know this, I really do. But my comp keyboard was stronger than I- I have no idea how to do it. I'll probably just cheat and copy from your post, then
*blushes some more*